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rhyming poetry contest entry24 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
That is a beautiful poem! I think we are made from the same mold because I've been writing all my life too. I prefer rhythm and rhyme also. My writing comes from my heart and my moods too. Great job@@
Patty
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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That is a beautiful poem! I think we are made from the same mold because I've been writing all my life too. I prefer rhythm and rhyme also. My writing comes from my heart and my moods too. Great job@@
Patty
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Hi Patty Thank you for your review and yes rhyme and metered poems are my favourites also although have had a go at free verse at times to challenge myself Cheers Christine
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You're welcome!
Since I started in here I've tried more too.
Comment from Louise Michelle
This is so sweet! There was a time when parents had favorites and even let their kids know which was which. It certainly led to a lot of strife with siblings. Your children are lucky to have you - your poem reflects how much you love them. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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This is so sweet! There was a time when parents had favorites and even let their kids know which was which. It certainly led to a lot of strife with siblings. Your children are lucky to have you - your poem reflects how much you love them. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Hi Louise . Thank you and no favourites despite my kids ragging each other about being ?Mums favourite? I enjoyed writing this one for them Cheers Christine
Comment from Sally Law
How sweet this is, Christine. I have three sons and know just how special that bond is. I love being a mother and grandmother. It is truly in my genes.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :+)
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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How sweet this is, Christine. I have three sons and know just how special that bond is. I love being a mother and grandmother. It is truly in my genes.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :+)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Hi Sally Thanks so much and yes they are all special and different so that keeps me busy LOL I also have 4 grandaughters who are so special and very much loved Cheers Christine
Comment from Mark D. R.
Hi Christine!
Nice loving tribute to the poet Mum's three parts of her life (-:
I too like to use FanArt and I know some of my posts have been graced by GaliaG's illustrations. Good choice for your contest entry.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Christine!
Nice loving tribute to the poet Mum's three parts of her life (-:
I too like to use FanArt and I know some of my posts have been graced by GaliaG's illustrations. Good choice for your contest entry.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Mark Thank you and yes I loved this image for my post gaood choice I thought Cheers For your review Christine
Comment from Janetsue
It's amazing how a mother's heart can enlarge itself to provide equal love to all her children no matter how many there are. I particularly like the ending because we all wish the memories held of us will be wonderful ones.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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It's amazing how a mother's heart can enlarge itself to provide equal love to all her children no matter how many there are. I particularly like the ending because we all wish the memories held of us will be wonderful ones.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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HI Spangle Thanks for reading much appreciated and yes equal love is the only way to go
Cheers Christine
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Comment from Debra White
Hi Chrissie,
I totally relate to your poem. I have three children too and my love for them is equal and all encompassing. They are all so different but all so mine!
Beautifully rhymed and metered, I wish you all the best in the contest.
Kind regards, Debra :)
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Chrissie,
I totally relate to your poem. I have three children too and my love for them is equal and all encompassing. They are all so different but all so mine!
Beautifully rhymed and metered, I wish you all the best in the contest.
Kind regards, Debra :)
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Debra Thanks for your review and yes you know what ai am talking about mine are all different too but each one unique Cheers Christine
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Chrissy, what a moving poem. You make it clear, not just in this poem but in other work you post, just how important your family are to you. Like you I have 3 children, Catherine, Martin and Bill (and 7 grandchildren). Like you I love them all. A good poem and I wish you well in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hello Chrissy, what a moving poem. You make it clear, not just in this poem but in other work you post, just how important your family are to you. Like you I have 3 children, Catherine, Martin and Bill (and 7 grandchildren). Like you I love them all. A good poem and I wish you well in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Dorothy, Thanks so much and yes my family is important so are my friends and I have made lovely FS friends here like you and value your and their friendship and support Cheers Chrisxx
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the contest Christine. This was very well done and also a great tribute to mothers everywhere. We do tend to give out a piece of our heart and even our soul every time we give birth. It is nice to know that there is that forever link. Very enjoyable.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Good luck in the contest Christine. This was very well done and also a great tribute to mothers everywhere. We do tend to give out a piece of our heart and even our soul every time we give birth. It is nice to know that there is that forever link. Very enjoyable.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Ary, Thank you and I think it may touch many mothers here also i enjoy writing for my kids Cheers Christine
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You are so welcome Christine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt rhyming poem to let your children know you are still loving them although they are not under your care anymore, your legacy will carry on in their children.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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A very well-written heartfelt rhyming poem to let your children know you are still loving them although they are not under your care anymore, your legacy will carry on in their children.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Sandra, Thanks so much and yes I do love them very much like many mothers ai hope I can pass on some legacy Cheers Chrisxx
Comment from Bucketlist
This was one of those moments that I felt virtually connected to your poem as a mother. As we age we have to think about the inevitable (No, not more time to
Sun bake!,,,,,,,) i liked your poem a lot, because it shows your love for all three grown up children. I hear of families where one child is left out, even from the will.
Thanks for sharing ,and good luck in the contest.
Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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This was one of those moments that I felt virtually connected to your poem as a mother. As we age we have to think about the inevitable (No, not more time to
Sun bake!,,,,,,,) i liked your poem a lot, because it shows your love for all three grown up children. I hear of families where one child is left out, even from the will.
Thanks for sharing ,and good luck in the contest.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Hi Trisha Thanks for reading my poem and so glad you connected with the sentiments ( No no more sunbaking it is getting to chilly Boo Hoo Ha Ha) still I will see the kids in 2 weeks Cheers Chrisxx
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Bottoms up, you are very
welcome!
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thank you 👍
