senryu (seek inner beauty)
The beauty lies within.15 total reviews
Comment from Sallyo
Nice one! Every syllable has to count, and be counted, in this tiny form. Mind you, they're difficult to review since the review has to be longer than the poem!
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Nice one! Every syllable has to count, and be counted, in this tiny form. Mind you, they're difficult to review since the review has to be longer than the poem!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review! (Aren't I the lucky one - I don't have to worry about making it to 150 characters!)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Senryu. The mirror only reflects the outer beauty everyone can see, but to reflect the inner beauty makes the outer beauty radiates like never before.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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A very well-written Senryu. The mirror only reflects the outer beauty everyone can see, but to reflect the inner beauty makes the outer beauty radiates like never before.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
See inner beauty - a challenge for all who look, to look beyond the outer shell. It could as easily be seek inner beauty. Reminded me of Dorian Gray. In other words - your mind stirred me to think, and think, and think again. Well done.
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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See inner beauty - a challenge for all who look, to look beyond the outer shell. It could as easily be seek inner beauty. Reminded me of Dorian Gray. In other words - your mind stirred me to think, and think, and think again. Well done.
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Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your comments. Much appreciated. Don't go probing that grey matter TOO much with all that thinking!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love these words, you touched my heart by them and stole one of my sixes, I wish you luck with the contest, looking beyond the facade and seeing inside our hearts is a wonderful gift, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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I love these words, you touched my heart by them and stole one of my sixes, I wish you luck with the contest, looking beyond the facade and seeing inside our hearts is a wonderful gift, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you hugely, Dolly, for appreciating my poem so much.
Comment from kahpot
How true, beauty comes from within and belongs to you and how you feel about yourself is what others will see, an excellent Senryu, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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How true, beauty comes from within and belongs to you and how you feel about yourself is what others will see, an excellent Senryu, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much for your kind review.
