After the Storm
Love nature's display after a storm2 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. The content is clearly nature driven as you express a storm's aftermath with vivid imagery. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. The content is clearly nature driven as you express a storm's aftermath with vivid imagery. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the read, review and feedback.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line, the picture is beautiful, the color scheme works well, and your message is true. I believe I would use lowercase letter throughout. The capitals stand out too much. But, that is only a suggestion. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line, the picture is beautiful, the color scheme works well, and your message is true. I believe I would use lowercase letter throughout. The capitals stand out too much. But, that is only a suggestion. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks for the read and review. I will consider your suggestion.
