Your Sandals
Walking in Your Shoes16 total reviews
Comment from James Orton
Each time I read this, it got better as i got the feel for its rhyme and meter. After that , the words just drip from the tongue like honey . Well done .very enjoyable read
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Each time I read this, it got better as i got the feel for its rhyme and meter. After that , the words just drip from the tongue like honey . Well done .very enjoyable read
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much.
Comment from royowen
What a superb work, that's how I came to Christ, (not that it was I that knew, but He knew my need...I didn't understand who Christ was) there was someone I wanted to be like, in my unworthiness, He had mercy. A beautifully composed ballad style and metered offering, articulate and smooth, in pentametric/tetrametric stanzas and abcb rhyming, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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What a superb work, that's how I came to Christ, (not that it was I that knew, but He knew my need...I didn't understand who Christ was) there was someone I wanted to be like, in my unworthiness, He had mercy. A beautifully composed ballad style and metered offering, articulate and smooth, in pentametric/tetrametric stanzas and abcb rhyming, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you, Roy!
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Most welcome
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Very nice eloquently articulated devotional poem. I'm confident that your readers will be both inspired and encouraged by this piece. Thank you for sharing this. Also the artwork chosen pairs perfectly with this poem.
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Very nice eloquently articulated devotional poem. I'm confident that your readers will be both inspired and encouraged by this piece. Thank you for sharing this. Also the artwork chosen pairs perfectly with this poem.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much, Brenda.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from beencounter
I thought your poem had one of the best rhythm and rhyming that I've read in a long time. The subject matter was perfect, of course :) Good luck in the contest!
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I thought your poem had one of the best rhythm and rhyming that I've read in a long time. The subject matter was perfect, of course :) Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
Thank you very much!!
Comment from Bill Pinder
Now that is a great way to write a poem about shoes. Thanks for sharing this reminder about the best man who ever lived. We can never fill his shoes, but it's a privilege to be on his team and do the best we can.
Bill
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Now that is a great way to write a poem about shoes. Thanks for sharing this reminder about the best man who ever lived. We can never fill his shoes, but it's a privilege to be on his team and do the best we can.
Bill
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much.
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Thank you so much.
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an unusual and fabulous write and of course it is related to footwear and to your faith and I found your words endearing and honest, I wish you luck with the contest, this is a fine write, great rhymes and flow, love Dolly x
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This is an unusual and fabulous write and of course it is related to footwear and to your faith and I found your words endearing and honest, I wish you luck with the contest, this is a fine write, great rhymes and flow, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you.
