Sunrise
The dawning of a new day.6 total reviews
Comment from mrsmajor
Hi,
A beautiful meaningful poem, and written well using the 5 line form as required..
The day..."chasing back the dark of night"...I really enjoyed this...your combination of words and picture make this poem come alive...
Thanks for sharing...
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Hi,
A beautiful meaningful poem, and written well using the 5 line form as required..
The day..."chasing back the dark of night"...I really enjoyed this...your combination of words and picture make this poem come alive...
Thanks for sharing...
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Thank you ever so much! I greatly appreciate your reviewing and comments!
Comment from scongrove
Love this, Faye! The artwork is breathtaking, and your words stand out with great meaning. I would love to have this as a piece of artwork. It would be an inspiration.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Love this, Faye! The artwork is breathtaking, and your words stand out with great meaning. I would love to have this as a piece of artwork. It would be an inspiration.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I sincerely thank you for the read and the six stars!
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You are very welcome my friend :)
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
The dawn
breaks forth
in glorious light -
chasing back the dark of night:
birthing a new day.
Excellent description of the break of day
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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The dawn
breaks forth
in glorious light -
chasing back the dark of night:
birthing a new day.
Excellent description of the break of day
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you so very much! I am honored by your review!
Comment from Sugarray77
I enjoyed this verse about the daylight coming to chase darkness away. It has a positive, hopeful ring to it. I wish you good luck in the contest with this good prompt.
Melissa
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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I enjoyed this verse about the daylight coming to chase darkness away. It has a positive, hopeful ring to it. I wish you good luck in the contest with this good prompt.
Melissa
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you so ever much! I am honored by your review and comments! Also thank you for the good luck wish!
Comment from Mark D. R.
You ably described in a few words the feeling of dawn breaking on a new day and the possibilities that may enfold. Your selected illustration magnifies that emotion.
Good luck in your contest entry.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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You ably described in a few words the feeling of dawn breaking on a new day and the possibilities that may enfold. Your selected illustration magnifies that emotion.
Good luck in your contest entry.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you so very much! Your review and comments are greatly appreciated! Also thank you for the good luck wish!
Comment from Raul1
In this poem a new day gives birth. Interesting poem. I like it. I like how you structured this poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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In this poem a new day gives birth. Interesting poem. I like it. I like how you structured this poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you! I ever so appreciate your review, comments and good luck wish!
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You're welcome.
