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A Timely Kyrielle

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Comment from Diana L Crawford
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Beautiful! And so thought-provoking! If only we could all get along. This piece rhymes and flows beautifully! It is sad to know there are those that care so little about life and the value of their fellow man!

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
    Thank you so much for reading and sharing your insightful sentiments!
reply by Diana L Crawford on 05-Aug-2019
    My pleasure to read your work! xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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These are poignant words June and you are so right, hate only breeds hate and we need love to spread to heal those poor souls who are unhappy with themselves and then take it out on others, your poem is well rhymed with a perfect flow and honest message, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
    Thank you for reading and sharing your sentiments on this piece. I appreciate your honest review, as always.
Comment from Sugarray77
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Very well done, June. This is a very timely write with regards to what is happening nationwide with shootings and violence. I am encouraged by your words and hope others take note too.

Melissa

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
    Thank you for reading and sharing your sentiments on this piece. I appreciate your honest review, as always.
Comment from Raul1
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This poem reminds us that hate is a very bad disease. It controls you negatively. Love is the solution to defeat the hate. Love always wins. Thanks for sharing! Excellent work!

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
    Thank you for reading and sharing your sentiments on this piece. I appreciate your honest review, as always.
reply by Raul1 on 04-Aug-2019
    You're welcome.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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I couldn't believe what I read on here this morning. Twenty nine people in two mass shootings. I can't believe someone didn't know those shooters were dangerous. How can someone hate that much? God Bless the families of all involved. The shooters families will suffer too you know. Well done, June.
Nancy:)

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
    Thank you for reading and sharing your sentiments on this piece. I appreciate your honest review, as always.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Kyrielle about hateful people that go around and seek innocent unsuspecting people to shoot down. I do not know all the details yet, but I heard about this horrific mass murder.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
    Thank you for reading and sharing your sentiments on this piece. I appreciate your honest review, as always.
Comment from Darlene BoClair
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I am watching the deadly mass shooting highlights from CNN, your poem lead me to watch. The words of Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr reminds the FanStory community of peoples love and hate relationships in the world.
Your poetic message can change our attitudes about gun violence.
We can not think this is normal for the USA.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
    Thank you for reading and sharing your sentiments on this piece. I truly appreciate it.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This poem speaks a moral message for humane living, and states that violence begets violence, as darkness cannot drive out darkness, light and love can bring humane living; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
    Thank you for reading and sharing your sentiments on this piece. I truly appreciate it.
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is a well written Kyrielle poem. So much violence over disputing belief systems, bad people on both sides of the spectrum. Your poem IS timely and you're right that only light can drive out dark. Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
    Thank you for reading and sharing your sentiments on this piece. I truly appreciate it.
Comment from Rikki66
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Truth is the truth. Already the gun is being blamed and not the gunman. From his online postings, this was a severely disturbed individual. I am sure this will be blamed on the President.
Rikki:)

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
    Thank you for reading and sharing your sentiments on this piece. I truly appreciate it.
reply by Rikki66 on 04-Aug-2019
    You are welcome.
    Rikki:)