~ Bridge Over Time ~
5 Line Poem16 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
~Bridge Over Time~, is short, succinct and very much to the point. Woven through each line of this talented poet's work are the golden threads of truth. To me, this is a six,but unfortunately I'm never given enough of them! I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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~Bridge Over Time~, is short, succinct and very much to the point. Woven through each line of this talented poet's work are the golden threads of truth. To me, this is a six,but unfortunately I'm never given enough of them! I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Oh, thank you so much DuchessOfDrumborg for your most thoughtful review of my short poem. Your mention of a six gave me much encouragement. I am grateful. ~DD
~DD,
You're more than welcome. A true six would have been preferable.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess
Comment from misscookie
Wow!
I like the words of your poem and in-between the words the message was powerful yet true. You captured my attention from the first line to the last This is what I call a food for thought write.
Thank you for sharing
cookie
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Wow!
I like the words of your poem and in-between the words the message was powerful yet true. You captured my attention from the first line to the last This is what I call a food for thought write.
Thank you for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you so very much MissCookie. You really made my day with your sparkling six stars and thoughtful review. I truly appreciate it. ~DD
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Your very welcome, yu do also.
Cookie
Comment from Sallyo
I like the simplicity of this one, and the theme resonates with me. It's not for nothing that bridges come into so many of our songs, stories, and ideas and you've caught the half-mystical feeling of them well.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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I like the simplicity of this one, and the theme resonates with me. It's not for nothing that bridges come into so many of our songs, stories, and ideas and you've caught the half-mystical feeling of them well.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Sallyo, thank you so much for taking the time to review my short poem and for your thoughtful comments. They are much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yes, 'your' bridge does include other than a physical structure. I like how you worded your verse.
Time will tell if the attraction is strong enough to overcome the turbulent waters below the bridge of understanding.
Good luck in this five-liner.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Yes, 'your' bridge does include other than a physical structure. I like how you worded your verse.
Time will tell if the attraction is strong enough to overcome the turbulent waters below the bridge of understanding.
Good luck in this five-liner.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thank you Mark. I appreciate your thoughtful review. ~DD
Comment from lyenochka
Great way to say it. I like your use of the bridge metaphor to bring a connection to a loved one that would span and overcome the physical, emotional distance over time.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Great way to say it. I like your use of the bridge metaphor to bring a connection to a loved one that would span and overcome the physical, emotional distance over time.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to review my short poem Helen. I am grateful. ~DD
Comment from Aussie
Amen to captured hearts. Your five line poem contest entry could be speaking of reaching a loved one that has passed; or a love of your life that is only reachable with you building a bridge. I found your poem to be a strong one. Five lines isn't much to tell a story. You wrote very well and best wishes for the contest. Welcome back, love, Kace. XX
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Amen to captured hearts. Your five line poem contest entry could be speaking of reaching a loved one that has passed; or a love of your life that is only reachable with you building a bridge. I found your poem to be a strong one. Five lines isn't much to tell a story. You wrote very well and best wishes for the contest. Welcome back, love, Kace. XX
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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K, Thank you for your thoughtful review on my short poem. Your comments are very insightful and much appreciated. ~DDxx
Comment from Sugarray77
I like your reflective verse DD. You did a good job building tension with the format you chose... a struggle... a quest..a wish. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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I like your reflective verse DD. You did a good job building tension with the format you chose... a struggle... a quest..a wish. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thank you Melissa. I appreciate your thoughtful comments. ~DD
Comment from Sally Law
Love this, dear DD. A romantic and sweet entry for the 5 lime poetry contest. Sending you my best along with good wishes for the contest, too.
Sal xo
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Love this, dear DD. A romantic and sweet entry for the 5 lime poetry contest. Sending you my best along with good wishes for the contest, too.
Sal xo
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thank you Sally. I appreciate your supportive review. ~DDxo
Comment from Pantygynt
This is well done. This batch of five liners has produced some good materia. I wish you well with this one that manages to get so much meaning into so few words.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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This is well done. This batch of five liners has produced some good materia. I wish you well with this one that manages to get so much meaning into so few words.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thank you Jim.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written five-Line poem about love relationships over distance made us feel about building a bridge to bring them closer although they are already living in our hearts.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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A very well-written five-Line poem about love relationships over distance made us feel about building a bridge to bring them closer although they are already living in our hearts.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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I appreciate your comments Sandra. Thank you ~DD
