My Mysterious Muse
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Comment from rockmann
Ah, yes...the unknown muse! The poem was well written and said a lot about how someone struggling to write and awakening in the night when the thought hits them like a lightening bolt. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Ah, yes...the unknown muse! The poem was well written and said a lot about how someone struggling to write and awakening in the night when the thought hits them like a lightening bolt. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanks. I think the little darling enjoys playing with me. LOL
Comment from juliaSjames
I enjoyed this appealing write about your erratic muse. Nicely rhymed and metered with a lavish helping of humour.
I can relate to the ideas that come at inconvenient times. And to the ones that fall flat.
Best of luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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I enjoyed this appealing write about your erratic muse. Nicely rhymed and metered with a lavish helping of humour.
I can relate to the ideas that come at inconvenient times. And to the ones that fall flat.
Best of luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanks. I've been reading some of the other entries, and the little darlings seem to be unreliable as a species. They seem to enjoy having some fun with us. LOL
Comment from James Orton
Like the poem. Did your muse have an influence in writing this? My take on this is that you, yourself are your own muse and it isn't another person. Am I right? If so, I think it is very cleverly written. Well done
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Like the poem. Did your muse have an influence in writing this? My take on this is that you, yourself are your own muse and it isn't another person. Am I right? If so, I think it is very cleverly written. Well done
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanks. Sometimes it seems there's a quirky little sprite who happens to want a poem about herself. There isn't another person, of course.
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I like how you have personally allow your muse to inspire you. I like that you use never shuts down, yet speak to you at different times of the day and night. I like that your muse have given you the confidence to think about all the love and thoughts that encourage a winner in any writing prompt contest entry. Good luck!
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I like how you have personally allow your muse to inspire you. I like that you use never shuts down, yet speak to you at different times of the day and night. I like that your muse have given you the confidence to think about all the love and thoughts that encourage a winner in any writing prompt contest entry. Good luck!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanks. I think that little muse likes to have some fun with me.
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
I enjoyed reading this lovely poem, and could read it multiple times. I also liked how you made the entire thing rhyme. Again, I enjoyed reading this, and will be voting for you. Good luck in the contest.
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I enjoyed reading this lovely poem, and could read it multiple times. I also liked how you made the entire thing rhyme. Again, I enjoyed reading this, and will be voting for you. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanks! I'm thrilled you enjoyed this so much you thought it deserved a six.
Comment from Neonewman
Oh, the muse. I understand the way they are for sure. Mine likes to hit me at my busiest moments, knowing darn good and well I will still listen lol.
Thank you for sharing.
God bless
Steve
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Oh, the muse. I understand the way they are for sure. Mine likes to hit me at my busiest moments, knowing darn good and well I will still listen lol.
Thank you for sharing.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanks. Yes, I think that muse likes to have some fun with me.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Ms. Snyder
I really like this rhyme scheme and it is something that I enjoy. I also agree with every line about my "muse". But I've never really thought of it that way. I think of it like my outlet of anger, sadness, frustration, love, hope and future wishful thinking. When I write it is usually from experience or something that I am going through - I am not like a lot of the writers on this forum and can't just concoct something out of thin air for a topic-based assignment. So I give you credit not only for entering a contest like this but sharing your processes. I hope that your muse is always with you for endless days and that what you write makes you happy. Good luck in your contest. Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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I really like this rhyme scheme and it is something that I enjoy. I also agree with every line about my "muse". But I've never really thought of it that way. I think of it like my outlet of anger, sadness, frustration, love, hope and future wishful thinking. When I write it is usually from experience or something that I am going through - I am not like a lot of the writers on this forum and can't just concoct something out of thin air for a topic-based assignment. So I give you credit not only for entering a contest like this but sharing your processes. I hope that your muse is always with you for endless days and that what you write makes you happy. Good luck in your contest. Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanks. When I saw this contest, it was like that little muse wanted a poem about herself. It came quite easily.
Comment from Ross E Silke
Good work on this. A clever write. I like the idea of the muse. An inviting poem with lots to gleam from. Interesting and I like the presentation. :0))
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Good work on this. A clever write. I like the idea of the muse. An inviting poem with lots to gleam from. Interesting and I like the presentation. :0))
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanks. That little muse likes to have some fun with me. I think she wanted a poem about herself.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Isn't that always the way? Wait until you are tired and go to sleep, and then up she pops all bright and breazy with some fantastic poetry you just have to get down or lose it! This is a really good contest entry about our will of the wisp muse! Well done and good luck! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Isn't that always the way? Wait until you are tired and go to sleep, and then up she pops all bright and breazy with some fantastic poetry you just have to get down or lose it! This is a really good contest entry about our will of the wisp muse! Well done and good luck! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanks. Yes, I think she likes to have a little fun with me in return for the poetry. LOL
Comment from Coco Jane
Quirky muse, eh?
How true that our thoughts are so jumbled and inconsistent.
At the end, consider using HER work is done instead of THE work.
I like the part about noise and junk.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Quirky muse, eh?
How true that our thoughts are so jumbled and inconsistent.
At the end, consider using HER work is done instead of THE work.
I like the part about noise and junk.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanks. Yes, she seems a bit quirky. I think she likes to have a little fun with me in exchange for the poetry. LOL
