Yalunga
Legend of Rainbow Serpent13 total reviews
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Aussie. What a good poem for the rainbow serpent and aboriginal folklore Loved the sox reference it did make me laugh. A good image also to capture your words I hope many read this Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
  |
Hi Aussie. What a good poem for the rainbow serpent and aboriginal folklore Loved the sox reference it did make me laugh. A good image also to capture your words I hope many read this Cheers Chris
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
-
Hello Chris, Many thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed. Blessings, Kace.
Comment from LisaMay
As an Aussie myself i can connect with your poem. The rainbow serpent is an important mythological creature in creation stories, and your poem is a worthy addition to the mix, although you will perplex some folks with the colourful sox!!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
|
As an Aussie myself i can connect with your poem. The rainbow serpent is an important mythological creature in creation stories, and your poem is a worthy addition to the mix, although you will perplex some folks with the colourful sox!!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
-
Hi Lisa, I couldn't help myself with the sox! I think I have made up for it by writing 17 chapters on the Aboriginal Dreamtime. Thanks for reading new friend.
-
Yeah... let loose from time to time!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Aussie, with this legend. I enjoyed reading it. Your words/lines flow smoothly with great detail and imagery. The picture is super. Even if no picture had been included, your words create one for readers. I like the historical significance and learning about new cultures. Thanks for the notes, too. Jan
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
|
You did a great job, Aussie, with this legend. I enjoyed reading it. Your words/lines flow smoothly with great detail and imagery. The picture is super. Even if no picture had been included, your words create one for readers. I like the historical significance and learning about new cultures. Thanks for the notes, too. Jan
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
-
G'day Jan, Thank you for your fine review. I know Americans are interested in our culture and I will write more! Love, Kace. XX
Comment from Sasha
I enjoyed this immensely. I love hearing about Australia's legends and you present them in such a fascinating way. I am terrified of snakes and wouldn't do well in the Australian wild. Very nice work with this one. Thanks for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
|
I enjoyed this immensely. I love hearing about Australia's legends and you present them in such a fascinating way. I am terrified of snakes and wouldn't do well in the Australian wild. Very nice work with this one. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
-
Thank you Sasha. We grew up with the snakes, only in the country areas. Now I live on the Pacific Ocean. Yahoo! Thanks for reading. XXK.
Comment from Jean Lutz
So many ways to worship. Inspires me to strive to give thanks to the Creator for all that He gave. In the beginning all was good. Let us be good stewards of planet Earth.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
|
So many ways to worship. Inspires me to strive to give thanks to the Creator for all that He gave. In the beginning all was good. Let us be good stewards of planet Earth.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
-
Hello Jean, Long time no see you? My surname is Steward, I guess for a reason. Thanks for reading, hope you are well? Love, K.
Comment from aryr
Very well done Kace. A nice rhyme pattern and easy to read because of the comfortable flow. I enjoy poetry that tells a story and especially when they encompass folklore as in the case of the Aboriginals. Thanks.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
|
Very well done Kace. A nice rhyme pattern and easy to read because of the comfortable flow. I enjoy poetry that tells a story and especially when they encompass folklore as in the case of the Aboriginals. Thanks.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
-
Air, Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed our folk lore. Love, K.
-
You are so welcome Kace, I do like folk lore.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about a legend of Australia and the rainbow serpent that is believed to be responsible for making the rivers and then returned to the sky.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
|
A very well-written poem about a legend of Australia and the rainbow serpent that is believed to be responsible for making the rivers and then returned to the sky.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
-
Hello Sandra, Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed our culture. Love Kace. XX
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is beautifully penned and a thoroughly delightful reading experience. I guess the reason snake's lack sox is that they seem to be missing the feet to put them on LOL. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
|
This is beautifully penned and a thoroughly delightful reading experience. I guess the reason snake's lack sox is that they seem to be missing the feet to put them on LOL. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
-
Hee,Hee, I wondered who would pick it up; snakes don't have feet!
Glad you enjoyed. PPS: I placed third in True Story Contest! Yippee!
Love, Kace.
-
I know - congrats. I don't know why I try they seem to really dislike my writing LOL.
-
Phooey! Write from your heart and all will be well. It's not about the stars, it's about getting the message of love out to the Universe. XX Kace.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
According to Australia's aboriginal legend, Yalunga, like Bahaime, in seven days, he made the rivers in many ways and returned to Creator in the skies; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
|
According to Australia's aboriginal legend, Yalunga, like Bahaime, in seven days, he made the rivers in many ways and returned to Creator in the skies; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
-
Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed. Blessings, Kace.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
K, I love the presentation of this poem. The picture and the brown colour background really adds to the earthy feel of this well written piece.
A very descriptive tale on the creation of deep rivers and a serpent wearing socks. All adding to the entertainment and enjoyment of this story in a poem. ~DD
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
|
K, I love the presentation of this poem. The picture and the brown colour background really adds to the earthy feel of this well written piece.
A very descriptive tale on the creation of deep rivers and a serpent wearing socks. All adding to the entertainment and enjoyment of this story in a poem. ~DD
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
-
G'day DD, Long time no see? Glad you got a kick out of this poem, I had some fun with it. Many legends I have to write yet Love, Kace.
-
K, Hello. I have been off line for a while - overseas and then being ill. I am trying to get back on top now. Good to read your work. ~DD
