Henry
Duck under the table.13 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was excellent, Kay, with wonderful, smooth rhyme, and the rhythm bounced along nicely. I love that picture from the Picture This group. Your words go beautifully with it. Well done!! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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That was excellent, Kay, with wonderful, smooth rhyme, and the rhythm bounced along nicely. I love that picture from the Picture This group. Your words go beautifully with it. Well done!! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Hello Possum, Thanks for reading. I wrote it in a hurry. I was more interested in placing Third in the True Story Contest! The story was called, "While I live, I'll grow." Love, Kay.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem about Henry. You did a good job with his story, Aussie. I like the great rhymes and the smooth flow of your lines. The hot weather seems to have confused Henry. I'm glad he found some cool water to rest in. (I know this is just for fun). Thanks for sharing. Jan
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I enjoyed your poem about Henry. You did a good job with his story, Aussie. I like the great rhymes and the smooth flow of your lines. The hot weather seems to have confused Henry. I'm glad he found some cool water to rest in. (I know this is just for fun). Thanks for sharing. Jan
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Yep, I wrote it in five minutes. Glad you liked it. Did you catch "Yalunga" about how Great Spirit sent the Rainbow Serpent to make the rivers. Bless you, Kace.
Comment from June Sargent
Somehow the name Henry suits him perfectly! Might need a little therapy if he thinks he's a fish. I'm watching our son's turtle while he and his family are on a cruise. Was told he liked boiled eggs. So, I boiled one, put it in his tank - and he sat on it. He think's he's chicken! Should introduce these two confused critters! I enjoyed this piece for the challenge.
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Somehow the name Henry suits him perfectly! Might need a little therapy if he thinks he's a fish. I'm watching our son's turtle while he and his family are on a cruise. Was told he liked boiled eggs. So, I boiled one, put it in his tank - and he sat on it. He think's he's chicken! Should introduce these two confused critters! I enjoyed this piece for the challenge.
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Oh, June, you made me laugh. I thought it was a yoke (joke,) we need more laughter in out lives, don't we? Blessings, Kace.
