Henry
Duck under the table.13 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
It would seem that Henry has at last found his little paradise pond in this blue bowl. Loved Henry's little tale Aussie, good interpretation for the pic.
cheers.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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It would seem that Henry has at last found his little paradise pond in this blue bowl. Loved Henry's little tale Aussie, good interpretation for the pic.
cheers.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Hello Pearl, Thanks so much for reading; had fun with this one. We feed the native birds in our garden I love birds and just now I am painting/pastel portrait of our famous Rainbow Lorikeet. Blessings, Kace.
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I'm enjoying a hot coffee (it was down to 8degrees in Townsville this morning) in my Rainbow Lorikeet mug.
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Beat you! It was 5 c here in Maryborough. Hee, Hee.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
An interesting story about Henry the duck. He decided he'd rather rest in cool water than have to dive for his food. But what will happen when he gets hungry again?
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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An interesting story about Henry the duck. He decided he'd rather rest in cool water than have to dive for his food. But what will happen when he gets hungry again?
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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I think his owner will feed him! Thanks so much for reading. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Was just reviewing some of the club members. This is quite clever! Love it he was "hot and bothered" and decided to cool a bit. Great job. It is not always easy to write to a photo prompt. You did great with this! Very creatively done!
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Was just reviewing some of the club members. This is quite clever! Love it he was "hot and bothered" and decided to cool a bit. Great job. It is not always easy to write to a photo prompt. You did great with this! Very creatively done!
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed. Blessings, Kace.
Comment from karenina
Cute! Why not indeed take the cool and easy way out? Ducks are known to be very practical I hear! There's no "quack" in his sense of logic! This summer has been so hot if I could find a bigger (MUCH bigger) ceramic dish I daresay I'd join him!---Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Cute! Why not indeed take the cool and easy way out? Ducks are known to be very practical I hear! There's no "quack" in his sense of logic! This summer has been so hot if I could find a bigger (MUCH bigger) ceramic dish I daresay I'd join him!---Karenina
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Hi Karenina! Yes, you have had a hot summer; we are just coming out of the coldest winter ever recorded. Thanks for reading my friend. Blessings, K.
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I wish we could slip slide from spring to fall and back again...avoiding both extremes!
--Karenina
Comment from jlsavell
Good evening from here my sweet friend. Love this poem. It's fun, truly fun!
I live around many ducks! And many roosters, and many dogs, a two goats!
Hope you are doing well.
Jimi
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Good evening from here my sweet friend. Love this poem. It's fun, truly fun!
I live around many ducks! And many roosters, and many dogs, a two goats!
Hope you are doing well.
Jimi
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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And a good evening from Oz to you, beautiful person. Glad you liked the fun write. I am fine and hope you are too? I was thrilled to take third place in True Story; all the reviewing was worth it. If you would like a peekaboo, it's called "While I live I'll grow." Much love from Kace. XXX
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have done for the Pix This Challenge Group. You used very good words that went well with this picture. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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This is a very well written poem you have done for the Pix This Challenge Group. You used very good words that went well with this picture. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Hello Teri, How are you traveling? Been hot over there? Winter is leaving Oz and it has been the worst winter on record. Thanks so much for reading and glad you got a smile. Much love, Kace XX
Comment from Sasha
This is very clever and a great entry for this Cooling off club entry. I wish you all the best with this challenge. I got a real kick out of it.... seems I need more characters to meet the site's requirement so here are a few dots .................................................... ............................................. ........................................................ that should be enough.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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This is very clever and a great entry for this Cooling off club entry. I wish you all the best with this challenge. I got a real kick out of it.... seems I need more characters to meet the site's requirement so here are a few dots .................................................... ............................................. ........................................................ that should be enough.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Hee, Hee, That was a ducky review my friend. Thanks a lot, feather in your cap! XXK.
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You are welcome.
Comment from aryr
What a cute picture Kace. This had a nice rhyme pattern and told a story. The story of Henry. You captured the thoughts of this fine fellow and presented them very well.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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What a cute picture Kace. This had a nice rhyme pattern and told a story. The story of Henry. You captured the thoughts of this fine fellow and presented them very well.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thank you my friend. It is a club entry. I had fun with it. Love, K.
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Smiles, I am glad you had fun. You are so welcome.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Kace. I like the concept of your poem for this post, therefore 5 stars. The lines are rather uneven, though. Syllable count ranges from 8 to 13. First three lines okay.
Suggest a few changes, but that is totally up to you as the poet, such as tightening up and rearranging some words. (I'm giggling.)
Dove in the water, sunk with a sigh.
Up the hill he waddled, backside a-swish.
He spied a ceramic water-filled dish.
Hot, bothered he made up his mind
to sit forever and cool his behind.
:) Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Hi Kace. I like the concept of your poem for this post, therefore 5 stars. The lines are rather uneven, though. Syllable count ranges from 8 to 13. First three lines okay.
Suggest a few changes, but that is totally up to you as the poet, such as tightening up and rearranging some words. (I'm giggling.)
Dove in the water, sunk with a sigh.
Up the hill he waddled, backside a-swish.
He spied a ceramic water-filled dish.
Hot, bothered he made up his mind
to sit forever and cool his behind.
:) Marilyn
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Tanka you Marilyn. I placed third in true story contest. Guess my mind was elsewhere. Had fun with the duck, I don't worry about form, have trouble through dyslexia. I just write...love, Kace.
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I know you placed third, Kace. Congrats. I signed your profile page. Fantastic. Hugs, Marilyn
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Thanks so much my kind friend. Love, Kace.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the Club Challenge splendidly. The instructions said to not post until the 12th so I haven't even given any thought to it. You deliver a delightful piece in poetic story for. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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This meets the Club Challenge splendidly. The instructions said to not post until the 12th so I haven't even given any thought to it. You deliver a delightful piece in poetic story for. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Yep, I wrote in a hurry, more interested in placing third in the True Story Contest. Thanks a bunch.
