Begin right
A good way to start your day31 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
Nice work up and presentation for this short poem, Getting up early at the crack of dawn gets you ready to start you day. Fir most it's a quick shower and a good hot
Cup of hot Out on the patio as you watch the morning to arrive. Getting back from working late to watch the sun go down, another day has come to a close.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Nice work up and presentation for this short poem, Getting up early at the crack of dawn gets you ready to start you day. Fir most it's a quick shower and a good hot
Cup of hot Out on the patio as you watch the morning to arrive. Getting back from working late to watch the sun go down, another day has come to a close.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for writing this review. I understand the early morning followed by a long day. Taking a moment to enjoy the morning hours and see the beauty of sunset is a works magic. Our lives are short, we must see the beauty of things and fill our soul with joy in spite of sorrow.
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Comment from Paul McFarland
I've seen a few of yours now, and this is the best so far. It is difficult to not force the rhyme when you do four lines in a row, but you have done a great job here.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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I've seen a few of yours now, and this is the best so far. It is difficult to not force the rhyme when you do four lines in a row, but you have done a great job here.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thank you for your fantastic review and encouraging input.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Begin right'
Considering this is Sabbath Sunday.
This is a fitting piece for me to review.
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It was Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while, Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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"Begin right'
Considering this is Sabbath Sunday.
This is a fitting piece for me to review.
...
It was Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while, Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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It brings joy and gladness to read such a detailed and heartfelt review, it is both informative and inspirational and I'm very thankful for it.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a good statement of religious faith. If you start your day with faith, you can get wonderful things done. The flowers are a sign of hope and light and a wonderful piece of artwork for the poem.
Keep writing and stay healhy.
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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This is a good statement of religious faith. If you start your day with faith, you can get wonderful things done. The flowers are a sign of hope and light and a wonderful piece of artwork for the poem.
Keep writing and stay healhy.
dp
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your honest review. The artwork is a picture I took recently. Faith is really a miracle of the Spirit of God.
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You are most kindly welcome, gb. You are a good photographer too.
Joan
Comment from Versch
It is a lovely poem that reminds me of my own routine every morning. The moment I wake up and before I go to bed at night I say my prayers, and this brings me comfort whatever else I do during the day. Great work! Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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It is a lovely poem that reminds me of my own routine every morning. The moment I wake up and before I go to bed at night I say my prayers, and this brings me comfort whatever else I do during the day. Great work! Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thank you for your fine words about my poem, it is thrilling read. Prayer enlarges our vision for impossibilities and give us faith to forge a head.
Comment from tfawcus
Some good advice here for those about to embark on a busy day. I found your two verses nicely balanced, with the shift in mono-rhyme giving a pleasing definition to your words.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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Some good advice here for those about to embark on a busy day. I found your two verses nicely balanced, with the shift in mono-rhyme giving a pleasing definition to your words.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your precious review of my poem and fore your input.l I really appreciate it.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Should "sun" be Son? Perhaps bloom in lieu of "smile"? Presents more of a flower's characteristic in that manner. Good advice for how to begin a day.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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Should "sun" be Son? Perhaps bloom in lieu of "smile"? Presents more of a flower's characteristic in that manner. Good advice for how to begin a day.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for the review of my poem and I agree with your suggestion made. Flows better and has a clearer meaning. Thank you for showing me this. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Begin Right, presented in two uni-rhymed quatrains, suggests that a moment of prayer can open the day up with a mind and heart that are both receptive, optimistic, and ready for great things to happen.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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This poem, Begin Right, presented in two uni-rhymed quatrains, suggests that a moment of prayer can open the day up with a mind and heart that are both receptive, optimistic, and ready for great things to happen.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your fantastic review, input and suggestions. It was really helpful and I appreciate very much.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, though the message is heartwarming in its uplifting appeal, I suggest one bit of editing, for example, with your permission:
1st stanza - last line - changing the word "smile" to "bloom," which is
what a flower does, and we humans can too...
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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In my opinion, though the message is heartwarming in its uplifting appeal, I suggest one bit of editing, for example, with your permission:
1st stanza - last line - changing the word "smile" to "bloom," which is
what a flower does, and we humans can too...
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much Eve for your suggestion on my poem and you're right and I'll certainly take it into consideration if, it doesn't affect the meaning of the poem. I really appreciate your candid input.
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You're very welcome, Sarah...Eve
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Perfect poem! I love the happiness in this. We all need more encouragement to talk to the Lord all day long! One's soul is so blessed when in constant communication! Joy can then be carried throughout one's day! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Perfect poem! I love the happiness in this. We all need more encouragement to talk to the Lord all day long! One's soul is so blessed when in constant communication! Joy can then be carried throughout one's day! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your beautiful review. It's so inspiring to read something feeding from someone who clearly has a link with the Lord.
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It was my pleasure to read! xoxo
