Seis Dias (six days!)
A limerick18 total reviews
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Well that's a nice tribute to Maria and I hope that your get together goes well and you have even more fun in person! Always lovely to see shout out to other people on this site and this limerick does the trick in style :)
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Well that's a nice tribute to Maria and I hope that your get together goes well and you have even more fun in person! Always lovely to see shout out to other people on this site and this limerick does the trick in style :)
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much for your feedback, Dale :)
I'm really looking forward to meeting Maria and her family!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
She told me she was coming over and would I be able to come up. Unfortunately, I can't. What a great time we could have had! I do hope you have lots of fun and enjoy each other's company. You both have the same sense of humour, so you should do. Lol. Don't forget to let us know how it went, and pop a photo on here too. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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She told me she was coming over and would I be able to come up. Unfortunately, I can't. What a great time we could have had! I do hope you have lots of fun and enjoy each other's company. You both have the same sense of humour, so you should do. Lol. Don't forget to let us know how it went, and pop a photo on here too. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much for your feedback, Sandra :)
I'm really looking forward to meeting Maria and her family! Hopefully you and I can arrange to meet up in the not too distant future... I feel like we've known each other ages!
Best wishes, Debra :) xx
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I'd like that. And, yes, we have known each other a long time now. Such a lot has happened in that time, too. Enjoy yourselves, my friend, and spare a thought for me! lol. xxxx
Comment from Heather Knight
As I've told you, I love this. Your Spanish title is something else( sorry, I don't mean to be mean, but it made me smile. Duerme means he sleeps) To be fair we don't have this expression.
Thanks so much for your poem. I'll treasure it.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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As I've told you, I love this. Your Spanish title is something else( sorry, I don't mean to be mean, but it made me smile. Duerme means he sleeps) To be fair we don't have this expression.
Thanks so much for your poem. I'll treasure it.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Haha! I went on the translator on google too... how would you say six sleeps in Spanish?! Thanks for your feedback as always! Best wishes and safe travels xx
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Seis días (six days) 😊
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Thank you! I changed it :) x
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:) Yours was cute anyway.
Comment from LisaMay
Your anticipatory limerick is lovely. It shows the warmth that can develop quickly when interests are shared.
How wonderful that you and Maria are going to meet! I like her stories very much too. I would love to meet some fellow fanstorians, but tucked down here in New Zealand is huge miles away from most other members.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Your anticipatory limerick is lovely. It shows the warmth that can develop quickly when interests are shared.
How wonderful that you and Maria are going to meet! I like her stories very much too. I would love to meet some fellow fanstorians, but tucked down here in New Zealand is huge miles away from most other members.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much for your feedback, LisaMay :)
I'm really looking forward to meeting Maria and her family!
I haven't met any other Fanstorian's before...
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Your friend Maria is coming to visit your land and you wish to have six sleeps in joy seeing her; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Your friend Maria is coming to visit your land and you wish to have six sleeps in joy seeing her; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much for your feedback :)
I'm really looking forward to meeting Maria and her family!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Mark D. R.
plaudits to both of you for connecting through the FanStory community and then actually meeting
great story for all of us; it should be fun meeting up!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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plaudits to both of you for connecting through the FanStory community and then actually meeting
great story for all of us; it should be fun meeting up!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much for your feedback, Mark :)
I'm really looking forward to meeting Maria and her family!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Fun little slant rhymes on the ends there. Or if you have a pronounced dialect, I bet "Maria, " "a year," and "see her" could be pronounced even closer to real rhymes. Cute and funny. Bet you share this with her.
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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Fun little slant rhymes on the ends there. Or if you have a pronounced dialect, I bet "Maria, " "a year," and "see her" could be pronounced even closer to real rhymes. Cute and funny. Bet you share this with her.
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much for your feedback :)
My Yorkshire accent means that my limerick actually rhymes in my head...so I'd pronounce the words; Maria, yeeya and seeya! LOL
I'm really looking forward to meeting Maria and her family!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Teri7
This is a lovely limerick and what a joy to meet one of your Fanstory friends in person. I think that would be so much fun. I hope you all have a great time and enjoy each other! love and blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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This is a lovely limerick and what a joy to meet one of your Fanstory friends in person. I think that would be so much fun. I hope you all have a great time and enjoy each other! love and blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much for your feedback, Teri :)
I'm really looking forward to meeting Maria and her family!
Best wishes, Debra :)
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you are so welcome. I would be excited to if I were going to meet you two ladies! I hope you have a wonderful time!
