Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

Now she has a key to his home? Oh, that's not good at all. The anger, resentment she feels towards Sarah, I'm so afraid something is going to happen to her. The chapter is very well-written, interesting, realistic start to finish, Great job as always.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019

Thanks so much dear. Glad you liked it. Monica is a crazy one and it can only get worse. Sad. Rox

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is scary but well done Rox. It is filled with suspense. You forgot to mark this for violence, so do that right away. It definitely qualifies.
A small nit:
"People always drive too fast along the stretch."

"Driving along (that) stretch."

I'm hooked to this mystery thriller!
Sending you my best today as well,
Sal xo




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 Comment Written 03-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019

Thanks so much dear and for the helps.

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Poor William. He must have woke up and realized he was on fire and tried to get away from it. It would be a horrible way to die. Monica has no remorse. She is determined to get Rob's attention. She is an evil woman. Well done, Rox.

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 Comment Written 03-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019

Yes Poor William, he never had a chance. Thank you dear. Rox