The Bush Telegraph
Pride comes before a fall15 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
I've gotta love a poem with a wombat in it! The peacock met his bedraggled doom because of his sinful pride - your poem details a cute moral tale - let that be a lesson to us all, we are all equal.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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I've gotta love a poem with a wombat in it! The peacock met his bedraggled doom because of his sinful pride - your poem details a cute moral tale - let that be a lesson to us all, we are all equal.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Hi Lisa, Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed. Blessings, Kace.
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:)))
Comment from Darlene Franklin
The parable of the peacock - This sounds like a story Jesus might have told if he had lived in Australia instead of 1st century Palestine. I appreciate your reference to the great pride-before-fall of all. Good look with t he contest.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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The parable of the peacock - This sounds like a story Jesus might have told if he had lived in Australia instead of 1st century Palestine. I appreciate your reference to the great pride-before-fall of all. Good look with t he contest.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Hi Darlene, Thanks so much for reading and yes, pride cometh before a fall. Blessings, Kace.
Comment from l.raven
HI Kace, so good to see you Sweetie Pie...the bible says God wants us to be humble...not to be all about ourselves...sigh...I love your poem my sweet friend...very well written with a great message...and a stunning picture...love much....Linda xxoo
hey you...how have you been???...I am still at my daughters...and will be back by my moms next week...it is always so busy here...everyday we do something...some times I just want to sit and be quiet...but my grandkids want me to go with them...it's a wonderful feeling...but they have more energy than I do....LOL...what have you been doing???...I hope you are in good health...well email soon...your in my thoughts sweet girl...love you lots...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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HI Kace, so good to see you Sweetie Pie...the bible says God wants us to be humble...not to be all about ourselves...sigh...I love your poem my sweet friend...very well written with a great message...and a stunning picture...love much....Linda xxoo
hey you...how have you been???...I am still at my daughters...and will be back by my moms next week...it is always so busy here...everyday we do something...some times I just want to sit and be quiet...but my grandkids want me to go with them...it's a wonderful feeling...but they have more energy than I do....LOL...what have you been doing???...I hope you are in good health...well email soon...your in my thoughts sweet girl...love you lots...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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G'day Lindy Louie, Glad you liked the poem. I have been away to visit artists where I started a gallery 25 yrs ago. Thirty people put on a super morning tea for me. It was a very tiring journey with my carer driving - five hours driving didn't agree with me. But, it was on my bucket list of things to do. Done it now! XXK.
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that is so awesome Kace...I'm just glad you got to go...so just rest up now...I have so many things I would like to get done in my life...but I know I can't do it all now...and I loved your poem...see you later...love you much...xxoo
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You are just like a bee buzzing in a bottle! "Let me out, I gotta lot of things to do!"
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LOL...you...but that sounds about right...
tomorrow is a trip to the library so mom can get some books to read...and then out the lunch...I hope your rested now...you stay pretty busy too...LOL...maybe we'll bump into each other...LOL...love you...xxoo
Comment from Gail Denham
A good story in poem - I like the descriptions of the various birds and critters. Most interesting - I'm surprised that the peacock spread his tail in the rain. They are so beautiful.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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A good story in poem - I like the descriptions of the various birds and critters. Most interesting - I'm surprised that the peacock spread his tail in the rain. They are so beautiful.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Hi Gail, thanks for reading. He spread his tail before it rained. He was vain and showing off to the forest critters. Blessings, Kace.
Comment from aryr
First good luck in the 'Share A Story In A Poem' contest, Kace. This was great to read since it did have a great flow and rhyme pattern. It did tell a story of beauty and pride taking the reins and the price paid for it. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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First good luck in the 'Share A Story In A Poem' contest, Kace. This was great to read since it did have a great flow and rhyme pattern. It did tell a story of beauty and pride taking the reins and the price paid for it. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Hello my friend and thank you so much for reading, glad you enjoyed! Love, Kace.
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You are most welcome Kace
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story in a poem. A very true statement that no one can ignore. The ones who are full of pride and of themselves will fall tomorrow and they will never know what hit them.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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A very well-written story in a poem. A very true statement that no one can ignore. The ones who are full of pride and of themselves will fall tomorrow and they will never know what hit them.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Hello Sandra, Thank you so much for your kind review. You got the gist of it! Blessings, Kace.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you share a complete story (with a valuable life lesson to boot) in poetic form. I thoroughly enjoyed it and the peacock was certainly a more than appropriate choice for depicting the sin of pride. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you share a complete story (with a valuable life lesson to boot) in poetic form. I thoroughly enjoyed it and the peacock was certainly a more than appropriate choice for depicting the sin of pride. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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G'day Mate! Thanks so much for reading and yes, you got the gist of it. Some didn't maybe they had blinders on? Blessings, Kace.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"The Bush Telegraph", is an exceptionally well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a true six, but unfortunately I don't have any left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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"The Bush Telegraph", is an exceptionally well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a true six, but unfortunately I don't have any left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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G'day down south! Thanks so much for reading and glad you enjoyed. Blessings, Kace.
Comment from country ranch writer
When people become to sure of themselves that's when danger lurks pulling one down feeling the rath of punishment for being to high and mighty.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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When people become to sure of themselves that's when danger lurks pulling one down feeling the rath of punishment for being to high and mighty.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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G'day my friend. Thanks for reading. We are all guilty of being big-heads at some stage of our lives. Humility is a learned behavior. Hope you are traveling well. Love Kace.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written poem with a good message to it. Pride does come before a fall. This is a great story in a poem with lovely art work to go with it. Best wishes in the contest my friend. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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This is a very beautiful and very well written poem with a good message to it. Pride does come before a fall. This is a great story in a poem with lovely art work to go with it. Best wishes in the contest my friend. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Hi there Teri, Thanks for reading and the glowing review. Hope all is well with you? Love, Kace.
