Whose Face Is This?
A mirror Quatern36 total reviews
Comment from Emma 2
Your poem was interesting, and I like this poem. And you did really good. This is why I'm giving you 4 stars. Hmm anyway keep up the good work. Your reader Emma
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Your poem was interesting, and I like this poem. And you did really good. This is why I'm giving you 4 stars. Hmm anyway keep up the good work. Your reader Emma
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Thank you for sharing my poem, Emma 2. I am pleased you think I did really good.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I know watching my face change in the mirror as I have grown older has been something. To watch it mold, and change, and grow is really something that should not be taken for granted for far to many people don't get to watch such a thing.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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I know watching my face change in the mirror as I have grown older has been something. To watch it mold, and change, and grow is really something that should not be taken for granted for far to many people don't get to watch such a thing.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Aging is indeed a process and one's face will change many times over the decades. Many thanks for sharing my Quatern, Mia.
Comment from bmethner
I can certainly relate to your query of having looked in the mirror. The poem was beautiful set and the repetition of lines "whose face is this" certainly adds to the power of this writing. The gentle rhyme also help deliver the point. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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I can certainly relate to your query of having looked in the mirror. The poem was beautiful set and the repetition of lines "whose face is this" certainly adds to the power of this writing. The gentle rhyme also help deliver the point. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Thanks you so much for your very kind praise of my Quatern, bmethner.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, old age it just seems to appear overnight, as we look in the mirror and where we have gone, great artwork with this wonderful poem, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Excellent, old age it just seems to appear overnight, as we look in the mirror and where we have gone, great artwork with this wonderful poem, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much, kahpot, for sharing my Quatern and your kind praise.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Mirror reflects true image, whether the person accepts or believes his own image as reflected on mirror believes or not, the viewer does not agree to accept the true image; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Mirror reflects true image, whether the person accepts or believes his own image as reflected on mirror believes or not, the viewer does not agree to accept the true image; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your kind praise of my mirror poem. I am very pleased you enjoyed it.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as it clearly speaks to the mirror theme. Seem like the reflection goes from young and vibrant to pretty raggedy overnight, or is it that we simply choose to ignore those subtle changes along the way of life :). Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as it clearly speaks to the mirror theme. Seem like the reflection goes from young and vibrant to pretty raggedy overnight, or is it that we simply choose to ignore those subtle changes along the way of life :). Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind praise of my mirror poem.
