Sunrise
3 line poem - 5-7-5 sylllables2 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is so beautiful. You have created "magnificence divine" for sure. Sunrises do "stir" us and we "wonder" at how life can be so gorgeous. You crafted precise words for your image.
I wouldn't change a word. You might make your words coral to make the pretty presentation stand out even more.
Good luck, Deborah.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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This is so beautiful. You have created "magnificence divine" for sure. Sunrises do "stir" us and we "wonder" at how life can be so gorgeous. You crafted precise words for your image.
I wouldn't change a word. You might make your words coral to make the pretty presentation stand out even more.
Good luck, Deborah.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind review.
Comment from JanPerry
Supergold from Fanart sure has some delightful and colourful artwork doesn't he? I like "heaven's glory glimpsed." It signifies our preview into the glory of heaven and the sunrise it ensues.
I haven't seen your name here before, Miajaffri. So good luck with the poetry, contest and stories we all delight in here.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Supergold from Fanart sure has some delightful and colourful artwork doesn't he? I like "heaven's glory glimpsed." It signifies our preview into the glory of heaven and the sunrise it ensues.
I haven't seen your name here before, Miajaffri. So good luck with the poetry, contest and stories we all delight in here.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you for reviewing my poem.
