Heart
love story in a poem9 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
A very sweet love poem, Alicia! What I like is that before the "rendezvous" of the lips, there was a meeting of minds and words speaking of life and faith in the romantic environment of the moonlit sky.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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A very sweet love poem, Alicia! What I like is that before the "rendezvous" of the lips, there was a meeting of minds and words speaking of life and faith in the romantic environment of the moonlit sky.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Hi! Something is necessary to set the mood besides nature. Lolz. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alicia. Very nicely worded love poem. The line that stuck out for me most was this one:
"Life is not life if the mind does not feel,"
One could ask: Did she mean to say 'heart' in this spot?
In re-reading it, 'mind' is a good choice because the mind is in torment when in love--until the next meeting.
Great job.
Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Hi Alicia. Very nicely worded love poem. The line that stuck out for me most was this one:
"Life is not life if the mind does not feel,"
One could ask: Did she mean to say 'heart' in this spot?
In re-reading it, 'mind' is a good choice because the mind is in torment when in love--until the next meeting.
Great job.
Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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You're a complete sweetheart. I heard on talk radio that women tend to view the heart completely romantically, but men tend to view romance and heart as an idea in the mind. I don't know the psychology of it, I'm still single. However, grammatically... it works.
Thanks again for the review and stars.
Goodnight. Hugs, Alicia :)
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Hi Alicia. You're welcome. What I know about men you can put in a thimble. LOL! I think the biggest joy is to appreciate each other's differences. I do believe they view "love" differently. :) Marilyn
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about a very romantic moment you penned down on your phone. The best poetry come from nowhere and when it comes to us we have to write it down in whatever way.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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A very well-written poem about a very romantic moment you penned down on your phone. The best poetry come from nowhere and when it comes to us we have to write it down in whatever way.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Hi Sandra. You're nice. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from royowen
It's good to see you mixing romantic inspiration with a wise perspective, indeed on cannot possess faith unless one believes, whatever that faith believes. I know because I'm an optimist, I always had hope, and without hope a similarity plays host to faith. Well done Alicia, may you indeed find love, or love finds you. Beautifully written my friend. Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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It's good to see you mixing romantic inspiration with a wise perspective, indeed on cannot possess faith unless one believes, whatever that faith believes. I know because I'm an optimist, I always had hope, and without hope a similarity plays host to faith. Well done Alicia, may you indeed find love, or love finds you. Beautifully written my friend. Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Hi Roy! You're very kind. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
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Bless you
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Bless you
Comment from DonandVicki
I remember the thrill of those kissing rendezvous. You well composed poem took me back when two hearts beat anxiously as one. You really don't know what your missing till it's gone.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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I remember the thrill of those kissing rendezvous. You well composed poem took me back when two hearts beat anxiously as one. You really don't know what your missing till it's gone.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from Winslow
Dear sunnilicious,
Great last line. Did the rendezvous linger or was it quickly over? For love is the greatest feeling, so intense it can blaze forever.
Cheers,
Winslow
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Dear sunnilicious,
Great last line. Did the rendezvous linger or was it quickly over? For love is the greatest feeling, so intense it can blaze forever.
Cheers,
Winslow
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Hi Winslow! The poem isn't based on any man in particular. I put myself on a dating site, but can't really handle it. I was just daydreaming in general. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Maria Millsaps
Strange how that works, romance comes knocking at the door of your heart and you have to write a poem. That's how the best poetry is birth. I enjoyed it alot.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Strange how that works, romance comes knocking at the door of your heart and you have to write a poem. That's how the best poetry is birth. I enjoyed it alot.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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I wish romance came knocking at my door. Thank you :)
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your spontaneous love poem and the intriguing artwork you selected. I enjoyed your story about the "rendezvous" and the quotes. Best wishes in the competition and in finding "pure love" again- Joan
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you for sharing your spontaneous love poem and the intriguing artwork you selected. I enjoyed your story about the "rendezvous" and the quotes. Best wishes in the competition and in finding "pure love" again- Joan
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Irish Rain
Well this is just lovely Miss Alicia!!
A wonderful entry,
a gorgeous picture, and it's just so
pretty!!
I love it!!
Good luck,
Blessings...
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Well this is just lovely Miss Alicia!!
A wonderful entry,
a gorgeous picture, and it's just so
pretty!!
I love it!!
Good luck,
Blessings...
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Hi Judy! You're nice. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
