I Can, Can't I?
contest entry29 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely poem with a sense of magical delight in the world. And there are those who avoid seeing the beauty in creation and miss out in all the joys of "fairy wings."
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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A lovely poem with a sense of magical delight in the world. And there are those who avoid seeing the beauty in creation and miss out in all the joys of "fairy wings."
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much Helen, I guess it was a statement and a question, lol.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is playful, yet affirming. There may be some readers who have doubts about some of their beliefs for fear of being criticized. How can anyone criticize us for our belief. They can try to get us to change them. But it is useless to criticize. It just makes us hold onto them tighter. I was just recently reminded of how the Native children stolen from their families were told they could not keep their belief. This is a good topic you chose.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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This is playful, yet affirming. There may be some readers who have doubts about some of their beliefs for fear of being criticized. How can anyone criticize us for our belief. They can try to get us to change them. But it is useless to criticize. It just makes us hold onto them tighter. I was just recently reminded of how the Native children stolen from their families were told they could not keep their belief. This is a good topic you chose.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much Liz for reading, reviewing and understanding. Your kind words definitely showed this.
Comment from Mabaker
Oh, so lovely! I wish I could give you fifty stars for this Alie, it is so beautiful. 'Yes, you can.' I love beautiful things, and if they are entwined with fairies and unicorns and magic 'Yes You Can.' Love U Anne
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Oh, so lovely! I wish I could give you fifty stars for this Alie, it is so beautiful. 'Yes, you can.' I love beautiful things, and if they are entwined with fairies and unicorns and magic 'Yes You Can.' Love U Anne
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thank you Anne for reviewing and for your kind words and of course the stars. Wow. Luv u Alie
Comment from Bichon
A very sweet and almost childlike poem. You have used nice and pleasant language to make the reader engage and live in the fantasy world. Great job!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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A very sweet and almost childlike poem. You have used nice and pleasant language to make the reader engage and live in the fantasy world. Great job!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from LisaMay
You can indeed!! You can be free to have your own beliefs because you can tap into the freedom of your thoughts and imagination, to write a lovely poem like this to show us those beliefs.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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You can indeed!! You can be free to have your own beliefs because you can tap into the freedom of your thoughts and imagination, to write a lovely poem like this to show us those beliefs.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for reviewing LisaMay, I appreciated your kind thoughts and comments.
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my pleasure!
Comment from kahpot
Well I believe this to be an excellent read, beautiful artwork and words that define you as yourself (individual) which we are, a very well written and presented poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Well I believe this to be an excellent read, beautiful artwork and words that define you as yourself (individual) which we are, a very well written and presented poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Thank you for reviewing and for your kind comments and of course the wishes.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the choice of what you can and will do against what others say you should or should not do. We are all unique and are able to make our own choices.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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A very well-written poem about the choice of what you can and will do against what others say you should or should not do. We are all unique and are able to make our own choices.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Thank you Sandra for reviewing and your kind comments.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderful free verse, Alie!! ;) ;) We can certainly believe whatever we want and allow our mind to really fly free without limitations -- no flying lessons required! ;) ;) Beautiful offering, ma'am, and best of luck in the contest!! ;) ;) Yvette
rainbows end --> rainbow's end
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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What a wonderful free verse, Alie!! ;) ;) We can certainly believe whatever we want and allow our mind to really fly free without limitations -- no flying lessons required! ;) ;) Beautiful offering, ma'am, and best of luck in the contest!! ;) ;) Yvette
rainbows end --> rainbow's end
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Thank you Yvette for reviewing and your great comments. Will make that correction in a few minutes.
Comment from Pantygynt
You would have no trouble in believing the cute little gnome. He is one of our politicians called Michael Gove. Like all gnomes he looks cute but his policies are are very different matter.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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You would have no trouble in believing the cute little gnome. He is one of our politicians called Michael Gove. Like all gnomes he looks cute but his policies are are very different matter.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Thanks for reviewing, wow someone who looks like a gnome, but then again if he is a politician, well enough said.
Comment from Janetsue
This is a very interesting free verse about free will. It flows well and offers good imagery. I like the question the reader is left with at the conclusion.
Of course, the answer is yes!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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This is a very interesting free verse about free will. It flows well and offers good imagery. I like the question the reader is left with at the conclusion.
Of course, the answer is yes!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Thank you for reviewing and your kind comments.
