Airbenders
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun write and how can some people do this to order! He he he, eating all the wrong food can cause a big stir in the nether regions! Love Dolly x
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This is a fun write and how can some people do this to order! He he he, eating all the wrong food can cause a big stir in the nether regions! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Loredana
As the Latin poet, Giovenale, your poem on farts and farting makes me smile. If you get a chance, have a look at his poem. In Italy, we sometimes studied poets whose poems related to real life, like physiological needs, hahaha.
I gave you four stars because of the choice of picture. It doesn't match the poem and it takes away from it. It makes it...vulgar in a way. No offense. I do like poems on farts, but not this picture. You might also want to check a famous French artist who became famous for his 'gases'. His stage name was 'Petoman'; he's around 1700-1800.
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As the Latin poet, Giovenale, your poem on farts and farting makes me smile. If you get a chance, have a look at his poem. In Italy, we sometimes studied poets whose poems related to real life, like physiological needs, hahaha.
I gave you four stars because of the choice of picture. It doesn't match the poem and it takes away from it. It makes it...vulgar in a way. No offense. I do like poems on farts, but not this picture. You might also want to check a famous French artist who became famous for his 'gases'. His stage name was 'Petoman'; he's around 1700-1800.
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
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Cheers
Comment from Patty Palmer
I love it when challenges are just dropped like this. I like seeing what other people can come up with really quick!
God bless "Keep right on writing!"
Patty
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I love it when challenges are just dropped like this. I like seeing what other people can come up with really quick!
God bless "Keep right on writing!"
Patty
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Many thanks, though I posted the wrong work
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LOL Stuff happens!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Yes, that is a word I know, but rarely if ever hear anymore. I love the photo. Your poem is well written. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
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Yes, that is a word I know, but rarely if ever hear anymore. I love the photo. Your poem is well written. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Many thanks, though I posted the wrong work
