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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Fanstory Frog"Short stories
14 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Good little froggy flash fiction story Trisha.
Mythical, mystical, and rejected by the others, - I wondered if that's where the fanstory (in the title) came from LOL
Love the picture, but then I do like the gargoyles. Enjoyed this one,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Good little froggy flash fiction story Trisha.
Mythical, mystical, and rejected by the others, - I wondered if that's where the fanstory (in the title) came from LOL
Love the picture, but then I do like the gargoyles. Enjoyed this one,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thanks for a positive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
How fun! And I am amazed that someone would 'gargoylize' my fun frogs! ;) LOL! A great imaginative offering for the contest, Trisha! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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How fun! And I am amazed that someone would 'gargoylize' my fun frogs! ;) LOL! A great imaginative offering for the contest, Trisha! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Talk to the chemical plant owner! It?s actually becoming more of a problem (mutated genes) than we probably think. Thanks for reviewing.
Hugs Trisha,
Congratulations on your lovely poetry contest wins
Comment from MamaBebop
Bucketlist, I saw your artwork and had to read this story. What a sad little tadpole turned mutant. I feel like it's maybe a story about how we sometimes feel on the inside-like we are a mutant, somehow different when really we are all just from the same lily pad.
Nice work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Bucketlist, I saw your artwork and had to read this story. What a sad little tadpole turned mutant. I feel like it's maybe a story about how we sometimes feel on the inside-like we are a mutant, somehow different when really we are all just from the same lily pad.
Nice work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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We are ruining the natural balance by pouring poisonous waste into streams and rivers.this frog was the victim of his father?s mutated genes,.thanks for reviewing positively
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Rikki66
Good luck in the contest. Where do you get these fantastic frogs, Chemical waste is responsible for any changes to plant an animal soon to be man?
Rikki:))))))))))))))))))))))))00
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Good luck in the contest. Where do you get these fantastic frogs, Chemical waste is responsible for any changes to plant an animal soon to be man?
Rikki:))))))))))))))))))))))))00
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Man?s desire for advancement and wealth also lead to careless or blatant disrespect for nature. Thanks for your review,
Hugs, Trisha
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You are most welcome.
RikkiLXVI
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Nice job with this little piece. A sad tale indeed as BatFrog laments...
He then resembled a gargoyle - need end punctuation here.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Hi there,
Nice job with this little piece. A sad tale indeed as BatFrog laments...
He then resembled a gargoyle - need end punctuation here.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you for reviewing. The missing punctuation was shamed back into its rightful place.
Hugs, Trisha
(Congratulations on your numerous accomplishments)
Comment from Susan Larson
At first I wondered if this was s parody of either the ugly duckling or Rudolph the red nosed reindeer. Cute or maybe not so cute twist at the end. ;>)
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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At first I wondered if this was s parody of either the ugly duckling or Rudolph the red nosed reindeer. Cute or maybe not so cute twist at the end. ;>)
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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I appreciate your kind review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Henry King
This is an excellent flash fiction tale. I like stories about mutants. I have always wondered, when a mutated four limbed animal has wings, what do you call them? I'm reluctant to call them angels or devils. The picture you used is also excellent. Gargoyles are carved from stone and become mobile on the clichéd dark stormy nights. Oh, what wonders you have evoked. Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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This is an excellent flash fiction tale. I like stories about mutants. I have always wondered, when a mutated four limbed animal has wings, what do you call them? I'm reluctant to call them angels or devils. The picture you used is also excellent. Gargoyles are carved from stone and become mobile on the clichéd dark stormy nights. Oh, what wonders you have evoked. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your great review! I?m glad you enjoyed my penning.
Hugs, Trisha
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Cindy Warren
Poor frog! I've heard of freak animals born too close to chemical waste disposal sites. Is that a real picture? That poor animal wouldn't know what he is. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Poor frog! I've heard of freak animals born too close to chemical waste disposal sites. Is that a real picture? That poor animal wouldn't know what he is. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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One never knows! Thanks so much! I appreciate your review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I told a story to some children about a tadpole that lived in tadpole swamp. This tadpole dreamed of growing up to be a beautiful goldfish. Imagine her disappointment when she turned into a toad.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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I told a story to some children about a tadpole that lived in tadpole swamp. This tadpole dreamed of growing up to be a beautiful goldfish. Imagine her disappointment when she turned into a toad.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much! I appreciate your review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from LisaMay
If he's a Fanstory frog, does that make us all freaks on this site??? He clearly is a superior frog because he can read the Lily Pad News.
Your story is a sad indictment on all who can't tolerate 'difference', and also on our modern era of toxic discharges leading to mutation and chemicals making diseases for living things. Basics of human life: clean water, love each other.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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If he's a Fanstory frog, does that make us all freaks on this site??? He clearly is a superior frog because he can read the Lily Pad News.
Your story is a sad indictment on all who can't tolerate 'difference', and also on our modern era of toxic discharges leading to mutation and chemicals making diseases for living things. Basics of human life: clean water, love each other.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much! I appreciate your review
Hugs, Trisha
