Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Have a Good Day"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
45 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
Very nice poem to just to say have a good day~
start the morning with such a cheer.
Hope all goes well during those visit.
God bless! "Keep right on writing!"
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Very nice poem to just to say have a good day~
start the morning with such a cheer.
Hope all goes well during those visit.
God bless! "Keep right on writing!"
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for your encouragement.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Thank you! I feel you wrote this just for me thats how perfectly directed at your reader it is! Love how you used the two sets of rhyming words for each verse! Awesome piece!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you! I feel you wrote this just for me thats how perfectly directed at your reader it is! Love how you used the two sets of rhyming words for each verse! Awesome piece!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and comments. I'm glad you felt like it was written for you and that's how it should be. I really appreciate your fine wording on my poem.
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Welcome and have a good day :) xoxo
Comment from Janetsue
You are presenting readers with excellent advice. Often, how a situation turns out depends on how we emotionally approach it. I'm a glass-half-full type of person and I know how we look at things has a big effect on how they get handled.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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You are presenting readers with excellent advice. Often, how a situation turns out depends on how we emotionally approach it. I'm a glass-half-full type of person and I know how we look at things has a big effect on how they get handled.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much Spangle for your excellent and encouraging review. Yes, our emotions and our reactions to things have a lot to do with how we're handled.
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You're very welcome, my friend!
Comment from Coco Jane
Good advice and well wishes for any reader. The many rhymes are reminiscent of a rap piece (I don't call them songs).
Nice last line to let us see that God is speaking.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Good advice and well wishes for any reader. The many rhymes are reminiscent of a rap piece (I don't call them songs).
Nice last line to let us see that God is speaking.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your informative review and your input. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Sallyo
Clever! This kind of persistent rhyme is easy for the first three lines, but then gets more difficult as you go on, and you achieved it in TWO stanzas! The thoughts contained (upon thoughts...too...) are also well worth reading and considering.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Clever! This kind of persistent rhyme is easy for the first three lines, but then gets more difficult as you go on, and you achieved it in TWO stanzas! The thoughts contained (upon thoughts...too...) are also well worth reading and considering.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. It was very encouraging to read what you said about the rhyming scheme in the poem. This I appreciate very much.
Comment from Winslow
Dear Gudbjorg,
Nice rhyming in your little poem. Make each day the best one yet, be kind, and greet others with joy. For if you do than today will be so much better.
Cheers,
Winslow
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Dear Gudbjorg,
Nice rhyming in your little poem. Make each day the best one yet, be kind, and greet others with joy. For if you do than today will be so much better.
Cheers,
Winslow
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review, especially showing kindness when greeting others. It will reward you with a better life.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Gudbjorg. I like this poem a lot. I like the rhyming scheme and the content message. This would be a good poem to practice every day. Robert
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Hello Gudbjorg. I like this poem a lot. I like the rhyming scheme and the content message. This would be a good poem to practice every day. Robert
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your inspiring review and I'm glad you liked it. I treasure your comments and appreciate your input.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise poem gives great advice to those who want to feel satisfied at the end of the day. We earn that satisfaction by BEGINNING the day the right way, with prayer and clear intentions to do and say the right things--then proceeding in the same manner!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Your ultra-concise poem gives great advice to those who want to feel satisfied at the end of the day. We earn that satisfaction by BEGINNING the day the right way, with prayer and clear intentions to do and say the right things--then proceeding in the same manner!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for the review of my poem and your input and comments were encouraging and great.
Comment from Ogden
I agree with everything you say in your author's notes, Gudbjorg, and, as intended, your poem offers sound advice, with a bonus of plenty of rhymes.
Have a good day!
Ogden (call me Don)
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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I agree with everything you say in your author's notes, Gudbjorg, and, as intended, your poem offers sound advice, with a bonus of plenty of rhymes.
Have a good day!
Ogden (call me Don)
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your excellent review, your comments were great and I really appreciate them.
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You're very welcome. :)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Indeed! I begin and end each day in 90 minutes of meditation and contemplative prayer. The morning prepares me for the days journey and the evening cleanses me of any errors I may have made along the way. You deliver excellent advice for all to heed and follow. Thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Indeed! I begin and end each day in 90 minutes of meditation and contemplative prayer. The morning prepares me for the days journey and the evening cleanses me of any errors I may have made along the way. You deliver excellent advice for all to heed and follow. Thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for a wonderful review, your input and daily routine. Your read was very encouraging to me and I'm going to treasure it.
