Alone?
100 words flash fiction.16 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
This is a really clever post! You tell it in first person and we don't know until the end that it's "she" unicorn. I hope it's a "he" also. Both are needed to have more unicorns.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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This is a really clever post! You tell it in first person and we don't know until the end that it's "she" unicorn. I hope it's a "he" also. Both are needed to have more unicorns.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much Helen for reading, reviewing and your great comments. I agree that both are needed for more unicorns.
Comment from Mabaker
How I would like to meet a magical animal. It would be a cat. What would my cat of magic look like. Magical coat, that could be fluffy or sleek, black, white, golden or brindle. Grey eyes, of smouldering passion or snappy black with flashing rage. Ah, my cat of magic how lovely would he be.
I am not just handing out 6's because you are my sister Alie, your wonderful writing has a hand in earning them as well. LOL Love U Anne
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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How I would like to meet a magical animal. It would be a cat. What would my cat of magic look like. Magical coat, that could be fluffy or sleek, black, white, golden or brindle. Grey eyes, of smouldering passion or snappy black with flashing rage. Ah, my cat of magic how lovely would he be.
I am not just handing out 6's because you are my sister Alie, your wonderful writing has a hand in earning them as well. LOL Love U Anne
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Aww that is so sweet that I have earned a 6er Anne, thank you for reviewing, I really liked your description of your magical cat, it would be beautiful. Luv u Alie
Comment from Heather Knight
What a cute story, Aryr.
I do believe in magical creatures and unicorns are my favorites together with fairies.
Your last paragraph is great.
Thanks so much for taking part in this event.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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What a cute story, Aryr.
I do believe in magical creatures and unicorns are my favorites together with fairies.
Your last paragraph is great.
Thanks so much for taking part in this event.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Thank you again Maria for reviewing and your kind comments.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a delightful little story of the lone unicorn who spies another. What a miracle, what a joy! I hope for her sake it's a "he," too. Great job on your flash fiction. Marilyn
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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This is a delightful little story of the lone unicorn who spies another. What a miracle, what a joy! I hope for her sake it's a "he," too. Great job on your flash fiction. Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Thank Marilyn for reviewing and I appreciate your great comments.
Comment from Aussie
Beautiful entry for 100 words flash fiction. In the stillness of our heart beating time with nature, we can imagine and sometimes see the other world of faeries, unicorns and many other creatures that exist in a parallel universe. We need to 'take the time to touch the morning." Well done my friend XXK.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Beautiful entry for 100 words flash fiction. In the stillness of our heart beating time with nature, we can imagine and sometimes see the other world of faeries, unicorns and many other creatures that exist in a parallel universe. We need to 'take the time to touch the morning." Well done my friend XXK.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for reviewing Kace, I appreciate both your kind comments and that you are a believer.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I do hope she found her mate! Perhaps if we just clap our hands and believe in unicorn magic? No, they'd be hunted for their magical horns . . .
See, you've caught my imagination. Thanks for the story!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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I do hope she found her mate! Perhaps if we just clap our hands and believe in unicorn magic? No, they'd be hunted for their magical horns . . .
See, you've caught my imagination. Thanks for the story!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Thank you Darlene for reviewing. Ahaaa and what a great imagination you have.
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You're most welcome.
Comment from poetwatch
The day the world stops in believing in something other than themselves is the day the world will end. Alie, I believe, just because we cannot see into the mythical world of fairies and all does not mean they do not exist. This is a good 100 Words Flash Fiction.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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The day the world stops in believing in something other than themselves is the day the world will end. Alie, I believe, just because we cannot see into the mythical world of fairies and all does not mean they do not exist. This is a good 100 Words Flash Fiction.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your kind words and beliefs Jose.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a veritable epic compared with your previous post.
Do not weep for the poor unicorn. Beliefe in the fantastic may be dwindling but this beast is enjoying a surge of new belief and here's why:
From dictionary.com part of the definition of 'unicorn'.
Finance. a relatively new company, usually less than ten years old, that is valued at $1 billion or more by public or private investors.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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This is a veritable epic compared with your previous post.
Do not weep for the poor unicorn. Beliefe in the fantastic may be dwindling but this beast is enjoying a surge of new belief and here's why:
From dictionary.com part of the definition of 'unicorn'.
Finance. a relatively new company, usually less than ten years old, that is valued at $1 billion or more by public or private investors.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Wow, that is amazing and really appreciated.
Comment from Rikki66
Seem I remember reading somewhere that Unicorns were gender-neutral that is why they were not on the ark, As long as some child has imagination the magical creatures will exist. Even if it is the child hidden in all adults.
Rikki:)
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Seem I remember reading somewhere that Unicorns were gender-neutral that is why they were not on the ark, As long as some child has imagination the magical creatures will exist. Even if it is the child hidden in all adults.
Rikki:)
Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Definitely a great way of thinking. I do believe we all have that hidden child (smile).
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So true!
Rikki:)
Comment from w.j.debi
I believe, I believe, I believe . . .
I like the affirmation that the fantasy creatures are still here and those who believe may still see them.
I hope the unicorn gets her wish and finds herself with a "he" so they can bring us more unicorns.
Excellent first person account from the unicorn's POV, reflecting both her sadness at being the last of her kind and the hope that perhaps she is not.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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I believe, I believe, I believe . . .
I like the affirmation that the fantasy creatures are still here and those who believe may still see them.
I hope the unicorn gets her wish and finds herself with a "he" so they can bring us more unicorns.
Excellent first person account from the unicorn's POV, reflecting both her sadness at being the last of her kind and the hope that perhaps she is not.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words, very much appreciated and I am glad you are a believer.
