Will You Linger Longer?
Possibilities after the night before.14 total reviews
Comment from Donald O. Cassidy
Emotion, feelin and anxiety are words in the writing prompt option. I think all those are present in this romantic poem.
It seems, though, that something is elusive, an emptiness, a longing not met.
So, the Linger desire might mean the passions migt need a higher basis, like marriage.
Don
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Emotion, feelin and anxiety are words in the writing prompt option. I think all those are present in this romantic poem.
It seems, though, that something is elusive, an emptiness, a longing not met.
So, the Linger desire might mean the passions migt need a higher basis, like marriage.
Don
Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thanks for your thoughtful review, Don.
Comment from fm wright
A wonderfully written poem incorporating feelings. To me, the speaker seems to want more than a one night stand as there seems to be a longing in the chosen words. Anyway, beautifully put. I like the picture and best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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A wonderfully written poem incorporating feelings. To me, the speaker seems to want more than a one night stand as there seems to be a longing in the chosen words. Anyway, beautifully put. I like the picture and best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Thanks very much for your considerate response.
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You are more tan welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A warm and passionate write of romance and obviously from a woman's perspective here. Mainly because a sexual encounter is filled with love for a woman and she yearns for the moment to last, whereas for men it is often another notch to their belt, especially in youth. I enjoyed your words, some love is built to last a life time, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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A warm and passionate write of romance and obviously from a woman's perspective here. Mainly because a sexual encounter is filled with love for a woman and she yearns for the moment to last, whereas for men it is often another notch to their belt, especially in youth. I enjoyed your words, some love is built to last a life time, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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It's in the lap of the gods I fear. Some miss the boat... and for some, better late than never.
Comment from Neonewman
Great entry you have crafted for this particular feelings writing prompt.
"This bloom of youth upon my cheek:
you put it there last night." Loved this line
God bless
Steve
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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Great entry you have crafted for this particular feelings writing prompt.
"This bloom of youth upon my cheek:
you put it there last night." Loved this line
God bless
Steve
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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If only it were true!
Thanks for reviewing.
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Right! My pleasure
