King Wise
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Comment from susand3022
Numbers aren't so bad... ask my father... he numbered his grandchildren... who could remember all those names? They're 1-12, then came along 2 more and they got inserted into the middle somewhere and my son was bumped from 12 to 14... wasn't that confusing? LOL Then again, he was a mathematician... so go figure. ;)
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Numbers aren't so bad... ask my father... he numbered his grandchildren... who could remember all those names? They're 1-12, then came along 2 more and they got inserted into the middle somewhere and my son was bumped from 12 to 14... wasn't that confusing? LOL Then again, he was a mathematician... so go figure. ;)
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
Comment from nomi338
In the opening lines of the "Our Father" prayer the words "Let your name be sanctified" NWT or "Let your name be blessed" KJV. There is clear evidence that the writers of the Bible revered and honored God's name. Your poem, though written as jest, further points out the power in God's name and the wisdom in using it or expressing it.
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In the opening lines of the "Our Father" prayer the words "Let your name be sanctified" NWT or "Let your name be blessed" KJV. There is clear evidence that the writers of the Bible revered and honored God's name. Your poem, though written as jest, further points out the power in God's name and the wisdom in using it or expressing it.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
Comment from Brenda Henderson
This is most assuredly a thought provoking piece. You definitely provided your readers with a good deal to consider. I especially liked the picture. It may not resonate in any particular way with you but to me it's the start of a homecoming celebration! Well done!
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This is most assuredly a thought provoking piece. You definitely provided your readers with a good deal to consider. I especially liked the picture. It may not resonate in any particular way with you but to me it's the start of a homecoming celebration! Well done!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, KING WISE, follows the vertical theme and suggests that any attempt to minimize the power of a thought, movement, belief, or even individuality is ultimately doomed to failure. Nice.
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This acrostic poem, KING WISE, follows the vertical theme and suggests that any attempt to minimize the power of a thought, movement, belief, or even individuality is ultimately doomed to failure. Nice.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
Comment from strandregs
Interesting take on the Nazi's of the world.
Herding people always works.
Just been listening to Sam Vaknin
Be seen or be sick
A human need for recognition drives every one and every thing .
The good and the bad. :-))Z.
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Interesting take on the Nazi's of the world.
Herding people always works.
Just been listening to Sam Vaknin
Be seen or be sick
A human need for recognition drives every one and every thing .
The good and the bad. :-))Z.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
Comment from sunnilicious
God chalked us up to a mathematical equation in a world of science. That was a well thought out perspective. Good storytelling. Nice work. God bless you :)
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God chalked us up to a mathematical equation in a world of science. That was a well thought out perspective. Good storytelling. Nice work. God bless you :)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
I think you need to send this poem to the head of all the corporations in the world, whom see many people just as numbers! There is much power in names and words, take, a horse, a horse, my kingdom for a horse, if it was a 81518195, a 81518195, my kingdom for a 81518195, it kinda takes the edge of it! Nice write and message and love the theme :)
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I think you need to send this poem to the head of all the corporations in the world, whom see many people just as numbers! There is much power in names and words, take, a horse, a horse, my kingdom for a horse, if it was a 81518195, a 81518195, my kingdom for a 81518195, it kinda takes the edge of it! Nice write and message and love the theme :)
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
Comment from WryWriter
A most amusing Acrostic poem that reminds me of all the political bah ha rah over certain words right now and the desire to change them. I suppose to garner more votes? I especially like the last "E" line of your poem.
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A most amusing Acrostic poem that reminds me of all the political bah ha rah over certain words right now and the desire to change them. I suppose to garner more votes? I especially like the last "E" line of your poem.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Kind Wise", is is an interesting and intriguing piece. Not for a moment could I imagine God, or anyone else as a number. Names like words have a power of their own I look for to reading this talented poet's next post.
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"Kind Wise", is is an interesting and intriguing piece. Not for a moment could I imagine God, or anyone else as a number. Names like words have a power of their own I look for to reading this talented poet's next post.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
Comment from karenina
You have such a creative mind! It astounds me that the very thing that is supposed to bind us together (religion) is the very thing over which wars are waged in the name of God--who was not a card carrying "member" of any one religion. Still, we fight to the death, even over like beliefs (such as love one another.)--It's enough to make my head explode!--Karenina
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You have such a creative mind! It astounds me that the very thing that is supposed to bind us together (religion) is the very thing over which wars are waged in the name of God--who was not a card carrying "member" of any one religion. Still, we fight to the death, even over like beliefs (such as love one another.)--It's enough to make my head explode!--Karenina
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
