King Wise
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Comment from misscookie
You captured y attention from the first line to the last
I found this to be a very interesting read,do you remember people had numbers branded on them,
that was not a good idea.
Today progress gets information mostly by numbers or ID numbers not buy names.
There will be a time when this system will if not already cause more problem for everyone.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
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You captured y attention from the first line to the last
I found this to be a very interesting read,do you remember people had numbers branded on them,
that was not a good idea.
Today progress gets information mostly by numbers or ID numbers not buy names.
There will be a time when this system will if not already cause more problem for everyone.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
Comment from Hitcher
I believe the Nazi's used numbers instead of names in the concentration camps to help dehumanize the Jews. So King Wise's game was doomed from the off I reckon. A name carries too much weight and gives substance to the one who carries it. A very interesting,thought provoking poem.
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I believe the Nazi's used numbers instead of names in the concentration camps to help dehumanize the Jews. So King Wise's game was doomed from the off I reckon. A name carries too much weight and gives substance to the one who carries it. A very interesting,thought provoking poem.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Lovely piece of Spiritual Poetry in the form of Acrostic Poem meeting the desired norms, and with a humorous touch depicting 'the sense/power of a Name can't be replaced by any Number etc.'
Nice Attempt!
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Lovely piece of Spiritual Poetry in the form of Acrostic Poem meeting the desired norms, and with a humorous touch depicting 'the sense/power of a Name can't be replaced by any Number etc.'
Nice Attempt!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
Comment from kahpot
Yes a number instead of a name just would not be strong enough, our name, all names have and give a certain power to the one who bears it, even King Wise, your artwork is wonderful, thanks for sharing****kahpot
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Yes a number instead of a name just would not be strong enough, our name, all names have and give a certain power to the one who bears it, even King Wise, your artwork is wonderful, thanks for sharing****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
Comment from Raul1
I like how you structured this poem. It is very easy to read and understand. Good work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Nice work! Thanks for sharing!
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I like how you structured this poem. It is very easy to read and understand. Good work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Nice work! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the review.
I am sorry, please explain your review, I do not understand your approach and point.
You have given no ground, point, reason of your dissatisfaction, rather if I have understood your words rightly, you have tried to mark the work as excellent but you have graded or rated differently.
Please explain your stand of rating the work.
My point is clear, by writing everything excellent, you rate me below excellent and for such rating, you have not explained the reason to help me understand my mistakes so that I can improve,
You are wise in English Language and Grammar and Creative Writing, you know how to review and rate a work.
I am not writing this to plead my work and prove yourself wrong.
My point is you have not clarified, explained and reasoned properly, as you have not stated a single word for rating the work below excellent.
Earlier, you did the same mistake.
I wrote to you but you never responded.
That means you write review for harassing a writer without rhyme and reason.
I do hope, this time you will explain yourself about the rating of my work whimsically, I mean, without offering any reason for such rating.
If I do not get your explanation within a few hours, I have no other alternatives but to request your good self not to offer such unscientific, unreasonable, disturbing, derogatory, harassing, illogical review and make reviewing a farce.
Just you read your review, I give you for your reading:
I like how you structured this poem. It is very easy to read and understand. Good work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Nice work! Thanks for sharing!
You have written no words to rate the work below excellent.
I have only two options:
(1) Mute you or
(2) Request you not to write review of my work
Please do not take it personally.
I have written no single word to hurt you.
I have written only the truth.
You read your review and realize the truth.
We make mistakes. If you have rated mistakenly, you may check it.
Wish you every success in your chosen goal,
With kindest personal regards,
Alcreator Litt Dear
Comment from royowen
its true that God has a number, and it's 7, the number of perfection, man likewise has a number and it's 6, the same as the devil 6. The Hebrew alphabet and the numerical system are tied up in the alphabet, as is Ancient Greek! The Jews in the internment camps, in WW2, were assigned numbers and affectively ceased to have names, prisoners have likewise numbers, which, I guess is part of their punishment. Loss of identity. So you're right, there's power in a name. Well done, blessings, Roy
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its true that God has a number, and it's 7, the number of perfection, man likewise has a number and it's 6, the same as the devil 6. The Hebrew alphabet and the numerical system are tied up in the alphabet, as is Ancient Greek! The Jews in the internment camps, in WW2, were assigned numbers and affectively ceased to have names, prisoners have likewise numbers, which, I guess is part of their punishment. Loss of identity. So you're right, there's power in a name. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
Comment from Boogienights
I like this more then any other of your poems. They are all interesting to me, and each one is unique, but this one was funny. It made me laugh and that to me is priceless. Thanks for sharing.
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I like this more then any other of your poems. They are all interesting to me, and each one is unique, but this one was funny. It made me laugh and that to me is priceless. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a writing with two--at least two--levels of meaning. It reflects man's extreme efforts to give more meaning to himself through over-the-top changes, making it both humorous AND serious. After all, The first people were named Adam and Eve, not 1 and 2! :-)
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This is a writing with two--at least two--levels of meaning. It reflects man's extreme efforts to give more meaning to himself through over-the-top changes, making it both humorous AND serious. After all, The first people were named Adam and Eve, not 1 and 2! :-)
Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
Comment from Neonewman
What is there in a name? We are in a number age for sure, soon they will be looking to chip us for number use.
Won't let them chip me lol
God bless
Steve
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What is there in a name? We are in a number age for sure, soon they will be looking to chip us for number use.
Won't let them chip me lol
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, I don't think there's any danger of misinterpret your words, because I don't even understand what it is you're trying to say. I'm sorry. But there it is. Ulla
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Hi there, I don't think there's any danger of misinterpret your words, because I don't even understand what it is you're trying to say. I'm sorry. But there it is. Ulla
Comment Written 26-Jul-2019
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