Comment from Tanvi Pauddar

Excellent

This is a very nice poem, and I enjoyed reading it. It could also go into the ode poetry contest, because it is complementing someone. Good luck in the contest, and good job.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review Tanvi. it was fun to arrange my friend into a poem, I hope she will love it, cheers.

reply by Tanvi Pauddar on 24-Jul-2019

welcome

Comment from Sheridan1

Excellent

All in all, this is a happy poem.
'Journeys' I think, because you need more than one to blend. Did you mean 'I tip'?
'fiddles with riddles' is pretty darn clever.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019

Cheers, thanks for the review and advice, I agree with both points. I hope it makes my friend smile.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. I like the short lines--they read at a quick pace, but still give readers a great idea about the character of your friend. The rhymes are great. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019

Thanks for the insightful review. It was fun to arrange my friend into a poem, I hope that she loves it, cheers.