ground knowledge,ground game
mindgame6 total reviews
Comment from JLR
ONCE I got into your writing I stayed with have a witty way of writing and quite well crafted. Your style is unique and that is what makes FanStory such a great sight. It brings a world of new discover at every reading. Good Luck.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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ONCE I got into your writing I stayed with have a witty way of writing and quite well crafted. Your style is unique and that is what makes FanStory such a great sight. It brings a world of new discover at every reading. Good Luck.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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thank you for the time of day for your review,jlr! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Mindgame is knowledge's ground knowledge and devastation is a ground game devastation, a good assumption about knowledge; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Mindgame is knowledge's ground knowledge and devastation is a ground game devastation, a good assumption about knowledge; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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thank you for the time of day for your review,dr alcreator! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from Lobber
Hi,
I write similar repetitive poems but usually with greater intent and purpose- I would welcome more insight into your message- see my "I can canI..." poem - Lobber
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Hi,
I write similar repetitive poems but usually with greater intent and purpose- I would welcome more insight into your message- see my "I can canI..." poem - Lobber
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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thank you for the time of day for your review,lobber! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from J Scott Tatum
Very interesting use of repetition, which I felt I was a part of the mind game/ground game while reading. It's wonderful how it grows as the complexity moves through each line and stanza.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Very interesting use of repetition, which I felt I was a part of the mind game/ground game while reading. It's wonderful how it grows as the complexity moves through each line and stanza.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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thank you for the time of day for your review,j scott tatum! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Interesting format. I keep thinking this might be called experimental poetry more than philosophical. I like the line "devastation is devastation of a common ground..." because it definitely describes and defines devastation. I really think your notes help the reader. This might work really well as a concrete poem later on.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Interesting format. I keep thinking this might be called experimental poetry more than philosophical. I like the line "devastation is devastation of a common ground..." because it definitely describes and defines devastation. I really think your notes help the reader. This might work really well as a concrete poem later on.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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thank you for the time of day for your review,crystiecookie999! also thank you for your most sincere advise on the experimental poetry and concrete poem. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from Sandra Montanino
Obviously, I am not only not a poet, but I don't have the talent to even give it a real try. I'm not sure that "gracious and extravaganza" are words from the middle-ages. But I'm sure you know what you are doing!!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Obviously, I am not only not a poet, but I don't have the talent to even give it a real try. I'm not sure that "gracious and extravaganza" are words from the middle-ages. But I'm sure you know what you are doing!!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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thank you for the time of day for your review,sandra montanino! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
