St Louis
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "St. Louis Chapter 10 part 1"Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Gosh! That's one horrific childhood, no wonder she won't tolerate any alcohol. I wouldn't either. The awful think about this story, Barbara, it happens all too often in real life. Now that Logan knows the story, he will make sure he keeps her safe. No arguments, either. This is a well written part, my friend, it has lifted the drama up a few more notches! Well done. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
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Gosh! That's one horrific childhood, no wonder she won't tolerate any alcohol. I wouldn't either. The awful think about this story, Barbara, it happens all too often in real life. Now that Logan knows the story, he will make sure he keeps her safe. No arguments, either. This is a well written part, my friend, it has lifted the drama up a few more notches! Well done. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
I enjoyed reading your work. It kept my attention from the beginning to the end. Unusual artwork. I have no edits or adjustments necessary.
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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
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I enjoyed reading your work. It kept my attention from the beginning to the end. Unusual artwork. I have no edits or adjustments necessary.
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Comment Written 21-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the encouragement.
