A Baby Wants Joy
A 3 line poem, when a baby prays for joy; read Author Notes107 total reviews
Comment from Crystal Clear Visions
This is a beautiful poem. Certain steps of our life from when we were conceived. Thank you for these humble and beautiful words. Have a manifesting day.ð???
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This is a beautiful poem. Certain steps of our life from when we were conceived. Thank you for these humble and beautiful words. Have a manifesting day.ð???
Comment Written 29-Dec-2021
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. Well, I can't see why this writing could be connected with any form of religion. I found it to be interesting and kind of cute. I love the artwork you added to the poem. It compliments the writing and brings it to life.
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Excellent. Well, I can't see why this writing could be connected with any form of religion. I found it to be interesting and kind of cute. I love the artwork you added to the poem. It compliments the writing and brings it to life.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2021
Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed your poem about the progression of growth in your acrostic style. I like that you start with the infant growing within the mother, and as the child matures, he/she learns to pray to God.
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Enjoyed your poem about the progression of growth in your acrostic style. I like that you start with the infant growing within the mother, and as the child matures, he/she learns to pray to God.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from pome lover
babies cry for attention. They cry from hunger, wet diaper, discomfort, or they are ill. They want to be held.
Babies learn about God when they're older from their parents.
I'm not saying babies aren't blessed by God, just that they are not aware of Him, as babies. They become what they are taught and what they see. You're right in that they imitate their parents.
I am not referring to any religion, just informed facts from first hand knowledge, pediatricians and books.
pome lover
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babies cry for attention. They cry from hunger, wet diaper, discomfort, or they are ill. They want to be held.
Babies learn about God when they're older from their parents.
I'm not saying babies aren't blessed by God, just that they are not aware of Him, as babies. They become what they are taught and what they see. You're right in that they imitate their parents.
I am not referring to any religion, just informed facts from first hand knowledge, pediatricians and books.
pome lover
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
Comment from Nathan J Hope
This is so lovely poem.I really love reading your poem about a baby.We all deserve happiness.Hope you will write a lot of inspiring poems.Best regards to you..
God bless
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This is so lovely poem.I really love reading your poem about a baby.We all deserve happiness.Hope you will write a lot of inspiring poems.Best regards to you..
God bless
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
Comment from Begin Again
Wonderful... from a pregnant mother talking soothingly or playing soft music to entertain her unborn child, then the birth and all the happiness that follows their growth, and a child does learn from what they see with their parents and surroundings. God wants us to provide a happy, joyful setting to bring the smiles to all children. Everyone needs to stop and think about the sadness happening now and try to come together instead or our world will continue to be a poor state of affairs. Smiles, Carol
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Wonderful... from a pregnant mother talking soothingly or playing soft music to entertain her unborn child, then the birth and all the happiness that follows their growth, and a child does learn from what they see with their parents and surroundings. God wants us to provide a happy, joyful setting to bring the smiles to all children. Everyone needs to stop and think about the sadness happening now and try to come together instead or our world will continue to be a poor state of affairs. Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
A baby is truly a gift from God. However as a woman currently carrying one I have been blessing to fall with I will say that pregnancy is so so hard and the baby, after the birth will be exhausting as well as a precious jewel. And parenting doesn't even end at 18! All in all a fantastically written poem I really liked it and the form was fabulous. Wish me luck I feel so sick and tired every day! kindest regards M xx
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A baby is truly a gift from God. However as a woman currently carrying one I have been blessing to fall with I will say that pregnancy is so so hard and the baby, after the birth will be exhausting as well as a precious jewel. And parenting doesn't even end at 18! All in all a fantastically written poem I really liked it and the form was fabulous. Wish me luck I feel so sick and tired every day! kindest regards M xx
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
Comment from writer723
I enjoyed your poem about a baby seeking joy. I like the different ways you described this journey, throughout the various stages in life. I've heard that we often learn through experience and observation. Your stanzas seem to adhere to this insightful theme.
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I enjoyed your poem about a baby seeking joy. I like the different ways you described this journey, throughout the various stages in life. I've heard that we often learn through experience and observation. Your stanzas seem to adhere to this insightful theme.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
Comment from AnnaLinda
Hi Daniel,
I remember reading this poem of yours before and decided not to review it.
I think I like your first stanza best. This is a unique poem for sure. Not sure I understand your message completely, but appreciate that is important to You.
AnnaLinda
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Hi Daniel,
I remember reading this poem of yours before and decided not to review it.
I think I like your first stanza best. This is a unique poem for sure. Not sure I understand your message completely, but appreciate that is important to You.
AnnaLinda
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
Comment from sunnilicious
I think everybody deserves happiness. However, a baby in the womb is like the attention grabber of all joys. The nuturing is necessary; animal or human. I liked your poem. Good visual imagery created. Good perspective presented. Nice Work :)
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I think everybody deserves happiness. However, a baby in the womb is like the attention grabber of all joys. The nuturing is necessary; animal or human. I liked your poem. Good visual imagery created. Good perspective presented. Nice Work :)
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
