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Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Within the Pathway of My Sadness"
A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.

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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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It is a long and solitary path you tread but, you did it with much grace and dignity, my friend. I especially liked the second stanza as it was quite well executed and serene in its sadness - flowers find no friends. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
    Again Mystic enjoy your Sabbath Sunday dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Within the Pathway of My Sadness, brings the past horrors into a vigil that picks at the wound to keep it open. Death of a son creates mourning that must be remembered and felt again.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
    Thanks Bill for your kind thoughts and review as always talked to Ricky 1024 and have a wonderful Sabbath Sunday