Obsessive Tendencies
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
I have to say I have never read a love scene between a wolf and a fairy come off so sexy and with such high intensity passion. This was well written and now I'm curious about chapter one LOL. I enjoyed it and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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I have to say I have never read a love scene between a wolf and a fairy come off so sexy and with such high intensity passion. This was well written and now I'm curious about chapter one LOL. I enjoyed it and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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Hooray!! I've got you curious -- then my job here is done (lol!)! ;) ;) Thanx for dropping by on this one, Angel, so very appreciated, ma'am! ;) ;) Have a great week! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from royowen
I'd like to pretend I can follow, icon follow the earth bound physicality, and the deeply earth bound need that lies within us, but the mystical creeps in, and then the rendering of the generational logic comes back. You have a great gift in stitching them together, well done Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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I'd like to pretend I can follow, icon follow the earth bound physicality, and the deeply earth bound need that lies within us, but the mystical creeps in, and then the rendering of the generational logic comes back. You have a great gift in stitching them together, well done Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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Thanx for dropping by for this Chapter addition, Sir Roy -- and thank you for taking the time to review it for me!! ;) :) Take care down/over there! ;) :) Yvette
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Most welcome
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written chapter. Opposites usually attract very stronglyrics. The bigger the differences the stronger the attraction becomes, the inner passion will have the final say.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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A very well-written chapter. Opposites usually attract very stronglyrics. The bigger the differences the stronger the attraction becomes, the inner passion will have the final say.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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Thanx so much for dropping in on this one, Sandra -- much appreciated! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from robyn corum
Yvette,
Thanks for the explanation. I was sooo confused. I thought - how many storylines is this chick working on??!?! I don't know if my mind (small as it is) can follow - remember? - tooooo many. hahahaha
The descriptions - the contact and physical interactions between these two individuals was described in an utterly fabulous way. FAB-U-LOUS. It was some of your best writing that I've read. Some of the moments - simple ones - like her both smoothing and pulling his hair - were perfect. Just putting the reader THERE. You know? Been there, done that. Nice job. So nice.
Thanks! (No sixes -- so sorry about that)
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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Yvette,
Thanks for the explanation. I was sooo confused. I thought - how many storylines is this chick working on??!?! I don't know if my mind (small as it is) can follow - remember? - tooooo many. hahahaha
The descriptions - the contact and physical interactions between these two individuals was described in an utterly fabulous way. FAB-U-LOUS. It was some of your best writing that I've read. Some of the moments - simple ones - like her both smoothing and pulling his hair - were perfect. Just putting the reader THERE. You know? Been there, done that. Nice job. So nice.
Thanks! (No sixes -- so sorry about that)
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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Yeah, I realize there are no sixes by Saturday... but just your awesome review here was worth it! :) Yeah, my romance writing isn't something that I've done on here much ... certainly do enjoy it, though, so I'm glad you liked it. This story will give me a chance to see how 'it works' on here...so, we shall see - LOL! :) ;) Take care! ;)
Comment from Ms. Snyder
What a fantastic love story between wolf and fairy you have started here.
I really loved this and I loved every second of your beautiful descriptions between the funny and the seductive.
Just as an FYI in the sentence and it might have been something you intended or maybe for the first time I have found something to point out to you - WOW MRW, maybe because I am first - to read it so early this AM - In the sentence:
"My feet left the ground as (I) my small body was lifted against his large torso and my hands found that thick, shaggy hair of his - it felt heavenly as I alternately pulled and smoothed it."
If you take out the (I) it should read properly I believe.
I am so happy if this is an error because it may be the first one of yours I've ever found!!! Wooo Whoo - usually other people get to them I am sure! I love this story and I will go back and put my review on the first chapter too MRW, CQ and Beautiful Teacher. I can't wait for more - I am really liking the characters in this one. Hmmm. I wonder how close this might be to some real-life love story??? But I know you have a wonderful mind for creating beautiful scenes. So it all could be made up too! Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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What a fantastic love story between wolf and fairy you have started here.
I really loved this and I loved every second of your beautiful descriptions between the funny and the seductive.
Just as an FYI in the sentence and it might have been something you intended or maybe for the first time I have found something to point out to you - WOW MRW, maybe because I am first - to read it so early this AM - In the sentence:
"My feet left the ground as (I) my small body was lifted against his large torso and my hands found that thick, shaggy hair of his - it felt heavenly as I alternately pulled and smoothed it."
If you take out the (I) it should read properly I believe.
I am so happy if this is an error because it may be the first one of yours I've ever found!!! Wooo Whoo - usually other people get to them I am sure! I love this story and I will go back and put my review on the first chapter too MRW, CQ and Beautiful Teacher. I can't wait for more - I am really liking the characters in this one. Hmmm. I wonder how close this might be to some real-life love story??? But I know you have a wonderful mind for creating beautiful scenes. So it all could be made up too! Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Ha! You are so very correct -- I have fixed that crazy 'extra I' hanging out there!! ;) ;) I'm so very glad you enjoyed this one, Lady Fonda -- just another of those crazy worlds my blonde brain has created....you know, there were two contests last month to write a chapter one (this one and the Gardens at Weatherbury) and I created them both on a lark for the two different contests....they went over so well, that I wanted to continue them, but I've also got Maggie and crew going so this one and the Gardens will only be monthly entries.... can't commit to more with school starting up again next month - ugh! ;) ;)
Thanx again for the review and have a wonderful weekend, Beautiful Friend! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from Tootsie55
What an interesting read this was. I am guessing this is for the younger set? Well done anyway. No spags. I found this second chapter easier to read;.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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What an interesting read this was. I am guessing this is for the younger set? Well done anyway. No spags. I found this second chapter easier to read;.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Just another chapter in the fantasy worlds of Y.M.!! ;) :) LOL! ;) Thanx so very much for your review, Tootsie -- I do so appreciate your jumping in to all of these. :) ;) The beginning of each are always there or you can simply follow from here -- take care of you and Geoff! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well done.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well with no grammar issues.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional.
Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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This was well done.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well with no grammar issues.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional.
Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Ricky 1024
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Thanx so much for the wonderful review, Ricky!! :) Have a great weekend!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Patty Palmer
No, I didn't see the first chapter but I did like this one and I'll be going back to read chapter 1 as soon as I have two seconds to call my own Any way. Thanks for sharing your chapter with us.
Patty
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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No, I didn't see the first chapter but I did like this one and I'll be going back to read chapter 1 as soon as I have two seconds to call my own Any way. Thanks for sharing your chapter with us.
Patty
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Hooray! :) So, glad you enjoyed this one...hope you find the time to catch up so that you'll be ready for next month's installment! ;) :) Thanx so very much for stopping in for the review -- Gregor and Celeste appreciate your support! ;) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was brilliant, Yvette. I couldn't quite remember it at first and went back for a refresher, I'm so pleased you've started this one up again, I can't wait for more. For a fairy to fall for a werewolf, one that eats fairies! Well that is really different. Well done, and hurry back with the next part. :)) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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That was brilliant, Yvette. I couldn't quite remember it at first and went back for a refresher, I'm so pleased you've started this one up again, I can't wait for more. For a fairy to fall for a werewolf, one that eats fairies! Well that is really different. Well done, and hurry back with the next part. :)) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Hooray -- so glad you enjoyed this one, Sandra -- that means a lot ma'am! ;) ;) And this one is another that will be monthly (can't over-commit in the leisurely summertime because I won't be able to keep up once school starts back next month...ugh!) -- so, I promise, Celeste and Gregor will be around for a while...each month! ;) :) LOL! ;) Thanx for the review, ma'am and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Debbie Pope
The extent of your talents is mind boggling. This story is breathtaking in its lust and beauty. Your details, such as the description of the two clans, are so creative. I know you come up with that stuff off the top of your head while I waste time googling details to add authenticity to my posts.
Just to show you that I read every word, I'll point out that I did see one typo:
"Uhmmm." Such and intelligent answer from a supposedly sophisticated being as myself.
"and" should be "an."
Otherwise, I read perfection.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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The extent of your talents is mind boggling. This story is breathtaking in its lust and beauty. Your details, such as the description of the two clans, are so creative. I know you come up with that stuff off the top of your head while I waste time googling details to add authenticity to my posts.
Just to show you that I read every word, I'll point out that I did see one typo:
"Uhmmm." Such and intelligent answer from a supposedly sophisticated being as myself.
"and" should be "an."
Otherwise, I read perfection.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Oh, wow!! :) So glad you enjoyed this one, MQ -- I'm working on my 'romance' through this story.... you know, I now have three insane stories going?! I'm nuts!! ;) ;) But at least I limited this one and the Gardens to only one entry a month!! ;) ;) I can't resist, though, I just love all these different 'escapes'! :) ;) Will have another 'Maggie' ready tomorrow/Monday... got a bit delayed with college prep/surgery this week, but I'm almost caught up (I think!). ;) ;) Thanx for always being out there and for those awesome stars on this one -- so good to know you're out there! ;);) Yvette
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I am behind a chapter. Hope to read it after I get my grandsons to bed tonight. Eddy said that he was in the mood for a babysitter (me), so here I go. I adore them, but I hate getting them to bed. I can't do it, and my daughter wants them in bed early so bad. I hate seeing her disappointed face when she comes home, and we are still playing.
