Obsessive Tendencies
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
Quite a lot of "romance" between le petite and le loup garou , it reminds me of Patricia Briggs series Alpha and Omega. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Quite a lot of "romance" between le petite and le loup garou , it reminds me of Patricia Briggs series Alpha and Omega. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hooray!! So glad you're gonna join in the fun, Iza!! :) Celeste and Gregor thank you, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "His grin grew wider, those sharp incisors pinging not fear inside of me but desire. I felt the invisible draw toward him just as real as I felt the ground under my feet. That is, if the ground was still under my feet...all I could really feel was him. All my body wanted was him. And I didn't even know his name...", because you have an amazing way of describing Celeste's passion! I defenitely now see why you titled the book, "Obsessive Tendencies"!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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My favorite part was, "His grin grew wider, those sharp incisors pinging not fear inside of me but desire. I felt the invisible draw toward him just as real as I felt the ground under my feet. That is, if the ground was still under my feet...all I could really feel was him. All my body wanted was him. And I didn't even know his name...", because you have an amazing way of describing Celeste's passion! I defenitely now see why you titled the book, "Obsessive Tendencies"!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Oh, good! So glad you're hanging in there -- these two are quite fun to write!! ;) Thank you again! ;) Yvette
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
I liked how the title became our obsession from her obsession in the 1st chapter! Also, Celeste might be too into Gregor but what is he thinking!!?? Supposed to get married in a week...supernaturals living openly on earth coexisting with humans is different take as well!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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I liked how the title became our obsession from her obsession in the 1st chapter! Also, Celeste might be too into Gregor but what is he thinking!!?? Supposed to get married in a week...supernaturals living openly on earth coexisting with humans is different take as well!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Certainly gives the reader a lot to wrap their mind around... :) :) Thanx again for joining in! :) Yvette
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Well, now I get the gist of the story and what it entails, I'm settling right into the Fantasy genre you have created. It almost feels like a "Once upon a time" story. The mysterious future is beckoning me to keep reading. I am still mesmerized.
I am adding more. The emotional feelings that Celeste describes are so true to life and well-composed. This contains a true love content waiting to be exposed. It could be blessed with six-stars if I had them.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Well, now I get the gist of the story and what it entails, I'm settling right into the Fantasy genre you have created. It almost feels like a "Once upon a time" story. The mysterious future is beckoning me to keep reading. I am still mesmerized.
I am adding more. The emotional feelings that Celeste describes are so true to life and well-composed. This contains a true love content waiting to be exposed. It could be blessed with six-stars if I had them.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Hooray!! Again, I'm so glad you're enjoying, Rafy -- if I can provide you just a bit of the 'escape' I enjoy while I'm writing then I will say my job here is done! ;) Take care of you!! ;) Yvette
Comment from ciliverde
I am going to have to save some of my sixes, but here's another one for you. I love this story, and it is perfect for me because I just finished watching A Discovery of Witches (TV series). Well this love match is a bit awkward considering... a lot of things. What could be better than forbidden love? Lol, thanks I am enjoying this :))
Carol
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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I am going to have to save some of my sixes, but here's another one for you. I love this story, and it is perfect for me because I just finished watching A Discovery of Witches (TV series). Well this love match is a bit awkward considering... a lot of things. What could be better than forbidden love? Lol, thanks I am enjoying this :))
Carol
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Ain't nothin' better... and awkward certainly makes for interesting, yeah?? LOL! I am so very glad you're really enjoying.... fantasy is not the 'preferred genre' of many here so, it's so good to find a fellow 'fantasy fan' (wink, wink!) Thank you again, Carol for those awesome stars and for your 'jumping on board' for Celeste and Gregor... gonna get interesting! :) Take care up there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Rikki66
Seems to me that women and fairy women both are enchanted with big hairy men that seduce them on a whim. Gregor is a clan heir and engaged, his clan or his betrothed clan would readily tear Celest apart if she interfered.
Rikki
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Seems to me that women and fairy women both are enchanted with big hairy men that seduce them on a whim. Gregor is a clan heir and engaged, his clan or his betrothed clan would readily tear Celest apart if she interfered.
Rikki
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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You are right about that, sir -- aaaah, but what's a good 'forbidden' romance without a little 'peril' hanging over it, yeah?! ;) :) Thanx so much for these stars and for joining me, Rikki -- I am honored! ;) Yvette
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A bit of Romeo and Juliet here, I think.
Rikki
Comment from w.j.debi
Oh, Celeste is falling hard for the wolf. This is going to cause all sorts of complications for both of them. It's probably wisest to turn and run from this relationship, but what would be fun in that?
You deserve a six for this one.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Oh, Celeste is falling hard for the wolf. This is going to cause all sorts of complications for both of them. It's probably wisest to turn and run from this relationship, but what would be fun in that?
You deserve a six for this one.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Oh, yeah, they're pretty much both in trouble... LOL!! :) Thanx for such a wonderful review, W. J., and thanx for the support! :) Yvette
Comment from May 1
Wow, that first paragraph is so awesome. Haha, I guess love knows no bounds. Why not a wolf? Aww, she must be so cute when she blushes. It's too bad that their love is the Romeo and Juliet type (hopefully not with the same ending) Ouch, that's bad news that he is about to be married. Well, I am glad he wants to see her again but I am not sure how they will make their relationship work. I enjoyed this chapter as well. Your powerful writing had me chained to my screen, I love it.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Wow, that first paragraph is so awesome. Haha, I guess love knows no bounds. Why not a wolf? Aww, she must be so cute when she blushes. It's too bad that their love is the Romeo and Juliet type (hopefully not with the same ending) Ouch, that's bad news that he is about to be married. Well, I am glad he wants to see her again but I am not sure how they will make their relationship work. I enjoyed this chapter as well. Your powerful writing had me chained to my screen, I love it.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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You're so right... why not?? LOL! It really means a lot that you've taken the time to pick up on this one, May -- thank you!! Promise to keep you supplied with a good share of fantasy and romance to bring in Spring and welcome Summer! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great chapter to continue your amazing, well-written novel, YM. I enjoyed reading it. The dialogue and her thoughts add much interest to the story, so much that I was sad to see it end. I like how you develop the characters--great to know their names and their mission. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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This is a great chapter to continue your amazing, well-written novel, YM. I enjoyed reading it. The dialogue and her thoughts add much interest to the story, so much that I was sad to see it end. I like how you develop the characters--great to know their names and their mission. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thanx again, Jan, for 'catching up'.... I'm like a little kid and a bit 'giddy' that someone else is following along! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from susand3022
Oh, my word! How is it that I've been missing this story? I can't believe you made a fairy fall in love with a werewolf! Where do you ever come up with these things? LOL, Sometimes I think that you must have a jar with a bunch of random characters in it. You pull out a couple and challenge yourself to make a story our of them. A fairy and a werewolf? This ought to be interesting... my only request... you have to finish the story! No leaving me hanging mid-stream! :)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Oh, my word! How is it that I've been missing this story? I can't believe you made a fairy fall in love with a werewolf! Where do you ever come up with these things? LOL, Sometimes I think that you must have a jar with a bunch of random characters in it. You pull out a couple and challenge yourself to make a story our of them. A fairy and a werewolf? This ought to be interesting... my only request... you have to finish the story! No leaving me hanging mid-stream! :)
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Yes!! How is it that you've been missing this story...LOL!! ;) :) But I'm so glad you enjoyed this and that you've jumped on board with me!! ;) I do love a good romance and what better than a wolf and a fairy, yeah?!! ;) :) LOL! Thanx so much, my lady, for taking the time to catch up!! ;) Yvette
