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Man for God

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God Helps man who lives to work for mankind

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Comment from DonandVicki
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I have found several of your fascinating stories that I plan top review this evening. I like the way that you engage the readers imagination/ Very well composed. I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2019

Comment from Lance S. Loria
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I enjoyed reading your work. It kept my attention from the beginning to the end. Complimentary artwork enhanced the reading experience. I have no edits or adjustments necessary.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2019

Comment from Earl Corp
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I wonder if God regrets giving humans free will. I kind of got a predestination vibe from your writing that God knows what will happen and the potential outcome ahead of time.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

Comment from Rikki66
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The summation as I see it God is God, Man is Man. God can do for man if he so desires but man can do nothing for God but honor him. Good work.
Rikki:)

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

Comment from Lobber
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You offer many gems of wisdom- "Man can do everything he likes within the limited and God's gifted mortal power." - For me this a celebration of man's free will. - Lobber

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

Comment from dovemarie
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Dear Alcreator, I love your spiritual poetry. And I like your alliteration in different parts of this story. Born Free. That is true, God gave us the freedom that He Himself possess. I liked your style and art. Dove

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

Comment from Ulla
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Hi there, I may not agree with everything you're saying here, but I do appreciate that it is your belief, and you certainly show your strong faith. All best. Ulla

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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So to summarize, this is all about 'free will' which God granted man so he could choose between loving himself or loving God. Just like they chose in the garden of Eden between obedience and the vanity of knowledge. Nicely done and thank you for sharing it.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

Comment from Sally Law
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Although I don't agree on every issue outlined here, I do agree on most of them. I appreciate the attention you give God as our creator and that He is divine. These are central to my personal beliefs. Thank you again, for sharing.
Sending you my best today as well,
Sally. +)

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

Comment from the13thpoet
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Good Morning to the spiritual Dr. I know I sound like a broken record, but as always I enjoyed your spiritual offering. I had an exceptional liking to this one because I just posted a poem today that touches on some of the points you make. Great job as always.

the poem I posted today is called Man-made division it's only 15 syllables

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019