Man for God
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "An Act of Man!"God Helps man who lives to work for mankind
51 total reviews
Comment from royowen
My thoughts are not your thoughts, nor are my ways your ways, for as high as the heavens above the earth, are my ways above yours. Isaiah 55-8-9. Yes, God made us in His image, but we certainly are not like God, well done, good writing, blessings, Roy
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My thoughts are not your thoughts, nor are my ways your ways, for as high as the heavens above the earth, are my ways above yours. Isaiah 55-8-9. Yes, God made us in His image, but we certainly are not like God, well done, good writing, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
EVERGREEN piece of Spiritual Fiction having captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting its theme.
IMPRESSIVE wording as well as presentation.
These lines are particularly noteworthy:
"Man can act as he wishes,...God's infinite creations."
"Truly, God is religion free, caste or community free, creed or culture free."
"Man has created...or likes."
A great service of humanity, Indeed!
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
EVERGREEN piece of Spiritual Fiction having captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting its theme.
IMPRESSIVE wording as well as presentation.
These lines are particularly noteworthy:
"Man can act as he wishes,...God's infinite creations."
"Truly, God is religion free, caste or community free, creed or culture free."
"Man has created...or likes."
A great service of humanity, Indeed!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
It is pretty cool that we have free will and the ability to do and worship what we want. There are so many variations of God and what He means to people it's crazy. Great job
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It is pretty cool that we have free will and the ability to do and worship what we want. There are so many variations of God and what He means to people it's crazy. Great job
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
Comment from Bonjour Patita
Ah. Such an interesting picture you've given us of the trials and tribulations of man.
Knowing we have been given free will is so confusing to so many. But, how, without free will, would God be able to tell if we truly love Him - OR, are we simply acting out of the Law?
Well done.
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Ah. Such an interesting picture you've given us of the trials and tribulations of man.
Knowing we have been given free will is so confusing to so many. But, how, without free will, would God be able to tell if we truly love Him - OR, are we simply acting out of the Law?
Well done.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
Comment from kahpot
This feels like it could be an extension of the Father talking to Daniel, with very truthful and clear words, I love the artwork of mans arrival to his departing, very well done****kahpot
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This feels like it could be an extension of the Father talking to Daniel, with very truthful and clear words, I love the artwork of mans arrival to his departing, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
Comment from Raul1
I think that God is a wonderful being itself. He loves us all. He wants to do right by all of us. I like your story about God. It is wonderful and refreshing. No grammatical errors. I like your story.
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I think that God is a wonderful being itself. He loves us all. He wants to do right by all of us. I like your story about God. It is wonderful and refreshing. No grammatical errors. I like your story.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2019
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Okay. I'm curious now are you a professional or lay Philosopher? Yet again thought provoking and compelling narrative. I'm certain that your readers will appreciate this offering. Expertly crafted.
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Okay. I'm curious now are you a professional or lay Philosopher? Yet again thought provoking and compelling narrative. I'm certain that your readers will appreciate this offering. Expertly crafted.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2019
Comment from WryWriter
I enjoyed reading your work. God sees and knows all. God gifts man, but does man always obey God? God will be the judge of man.
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I enjoyed reading your work. God sees and knows all. God gifts man, but does man always obey God? God will be the judge of man.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2019
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Another well written spiritual story about the power of God and the abilities of man. I would look at this sentence again:
Man who lives as per God's words and plans, so he gets and enjoys God's grace and blessing.It reads awkwardly in my opinion, my friend~Debbie
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Another well written spiritual story about the power of God and the abilities of man. I would look at this sentence again:
Man who lives as per God's words and plans, so he gets and enjoys God's grace and blessing.It reads awkwardly in my opinion, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 22-Jul-2019
Comment from Sylvia Page
God is an all-seeing and merciful God. He is also a zealous God and He wants all of His creation for Himself. God does not have a religion, He is religion. Great writing.
Sylvia
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God is an all-seeing and merciful God. He is also a zealous God and He wants all of His creation for Himself. God does not have a religion, He is religion. Great writing.
Sylvia
Comment Written 21-Jul-2019
