Man for God
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "An Act of Man!"God Helps man who lives to work for mankind
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Great title--A clever twist of the trite phrase "Act of God." I appreciate your inclusiveness re God not being constrained to, say, Christianity, such as is pervasive throughout this site. Cheers. LIZ
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Great title--A clever twist of the trite phrase "Act of God." I appreciate your inclusiveness re God not being constrained to, say, Christianity, such as is pervasive throughout this site. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, An Act of Man, lays out the situation we must understand about our relationship with God. He is the Creator and makes the rules, we are His creation and follow the rules. Failing that, we need salvation.
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This story, An Act of Man, lays out the situation we must understand about our relationship with God. He is the Creator and makes the rules, we are His creation and follow the rules. Failing that, we need salvation.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
Comment from Victoria Grace
This was very powerful. I found myself rereading lines to make sure I fully comprehended the message in each one. I enjoyed how the narrative followed the timeline of man at creation, and then moved on to the roles/rights of Man and God throughout life. I do wish there was some gender inclusivity in the piece, but I understand the concept and reason for wording. The piece is beautiful. Great work love!
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This was very powerful. I found myself rereading lines to make sure I fully comprehended the message in each one. I enjoyed how the narrative followed the timeline of man at creation, and then moved on to the roles/rights of Man and God throughout life. I do wish there was some gender inclusivity in the piece, but I understand the concept and reason for wording. The piece is beautiful. Great work love!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your spiritual reflections. I admired your use of repetition for emphasis and your references to "Omniscient," "Omnipresent" and "Omnipotent". Continue to be strong and well- Joan
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Thank you for sharing your spiritual reflections. I admired your use of repetition for emphasis and your references to "Omniscient," "Omnipresent" and "Omnipotent". Continue to be strong and well- Joan
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
Comment from sunnilicious
God is everywhere. God is righteous. That is why we have messengers. We need religion for the masses to understand right from wrong and/or teach children. This was a well thought out essay. Nicely written. Excellent work. Enjoyable to read. God bless you :)
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God is everywhere. God is righteous. That is why we have messengers. We need religion for the masses to understand right from wrong and/or teach children. This was a well thought out essay. Nicely written. Excellent work. Enjoyable to read. God bless you :)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
Comment from January L'Angelle
I like your commentary on God. I agree with you. "God is Omniscient." and "God is Omnipresent." This is why we should be on our toes always. Yes we have free will but I would not like to be outside of God's favor. That's just me! Thank you for this... its wonderful. Respectfully, -January L.
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I like your commentary on God. I agree with you. "God is Omniscient." and "God is Omnipresent." This is why we should be on our toes always. Yes we have free will but I would not like to be outside of God's favor. That's just me! Thank you for this... its wonderful. Respectfully, -January L.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The statue of limitations and delimitation :"
Man cannot act for or in favour of God like God, for man is man and God is God. Man can do anything and everything he likes within the limited and God's gifted mortal power."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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The statue of limitations and delimitation :"
Man cannot act for or in favour of God like God, for man is man and God is God. Man can do anything and everything he likes within the limited and God's gifted mortal power."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An explanation of an almighty power, the unseen eye and the unconditional control over man who is flawed in many was and has free will, an interesting write, love Dolly x
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An explanation of an almighty power, the unseen eye and the unconditional control over man who is flawed in many was and has free will, an interesting write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
Comment from susand3022
I almost feel as if I just read this, Alcreator... the message is the same as the other one you have just written. The words are still good words, very interesting. :)
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I almost feel as if I just read this, Alcreator... the message is the same as the other one you have just written. The words are still good words, very interesting. :)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
Comment from samandlancelot
Alcreator,
I have to wonder about the way you talk of God here, that He isn't for one person or family or group. Yet, you expect Him to have someone pay for your premier shield at Fanstory. How is that not an expectation for God to offer something special just for you.
I thought it was your faith that God wanted to do this for you that had you hang onto this, but it seems to contradict what you are writing here.
I don't mean this in a bad way, I just wonder about the discrepancy between your teaching and your request.
Patricia
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Alcreator,
I have to wonder about the way you talk of God here, that He isn't for one person or family or group. Yet, you expect Him to have someone pay for your premier shield at Fanstory. How is that not an expectation for God to offer something special just for you.
I thought it was your faith that God wanted to do this for you that had you hang onto this, but it seems to contradict what you are writing here.
I don't mean this in a bad way, I just wonder about the discrepancy between your teaching and your request.
Patricia
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
