Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Well hello again good Dr. I think this would be where science and GOD would be in total agreement: "for every action there is an equal and opposite reaction". Whether we know it or not or choose to believe it, we are all connected and all our actions affect us, whether we know it or not. Great job.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

You are so right. We are all accountable for our actions, whether in this life or the next. Whether we face a human judge or God, we are answerable. Another excellent piece, ALC, and a thought-provoking one. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi you are absolutely right. No action, however small , goes with reward, big or small. To all actions there s a reaction, .it may come now or in the future. We may not know it but it comes. We think that we are being treated unfairly, but this reaction comes from a long time back. So we think there is no justice here. Or that we are a dumping place for unfairness , we change direction and get into further or more trouble.
I like the write. Very educative indeed.

Blessings

Benny

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I like artwork you choose to go with your write it is a perfect match,
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
I found this to be a very interesting read
this is what I call a food for thought write
thank you for sharing
Stay cool
Cookie

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

justice can be crooked . There are times when justice is not meted out to the wrong doer. And there are times when we suffer for no mistake of ours.
but still it is better to believe in justice of God.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-wrtitten non-fiction about a subject that is very controversial. We all know there will be a judgnment day waiting for us when our good and bad deeds will be judged by God, and we have to answer for each and everything we did or said or thought.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

Comment from Sylvia Page

Excellent

What a pertinent question: "Father, does man get justice to, for or of his act, action or activity?" son Daniel asked his father, Samuel.
Samuel's answer, when summed up, is deep and philosophical.
Best wishes
Sylvia

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

Comment from rockmann

Good

Wow, this is written so much like a legal document - and how many of us can really understand any legal writing without the writer present to explain to us what we are trying to read....
Taken phrase by phrase, it makes sense and expresses non-fiction ideas. At the same time this is not written in a style that father and son would ever hold a conversation. It's too hard to follow the logic without the breaks the human mind expects and needs.

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 Comment Written 18-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019

Thank you for the review.


Again, and again, you like before, never read Author's Notes.
I copy below my Author's Notes again for your information:

To achieve purposes, I have expressed the last paragraph, in legal parlance, in larger sentences, to express facts expressively, in order to give clarity of matter in expression



This is not a legal essay, or legal document, legal article, or legal note



I understand this work is neither a pure fiction nor a pure non-fiction



This is a partly fictional work as I have tried to express the tough subject in a fictional order of expression for appreciation of the essence of the subject



For clarity, emphasis and true appreciation, repetition has been necessary, expression has been in term and within the spirit of my art and style of expression, in a fictional spirit to make the subject interesting, purposively and meaningfully



You have expressed your review inappropriately: I give below your words:

- and how many of us can really understand any legal writing without the writer present to explain to us what we are trying to read....


I never understand, by writing this, what you are trying to point out, first of all, it is not a legal document, legal matter, and again you have written people will not understand only these lines for which writer must explain personally, this is inappropriate and wrong and derogatory.


I give below copy of my work:

"An act, action or activity, whether it is public or deems to be public, or deems to be non-personal or not, whether justice is sought for or not, every act, action or activity has its reaction or effect or result or consequence or justice, whether we ask, demand, need or expect it or not, if it affects anyone other than the doer, it comes out or will have a natural effect in consequence, whether doer comes to know it or not, whether the doer gets or enjoys the reward or not, or whether the doer suffers punishment for his act or not, whether others suffer consequence or performance result or effect of the act in his life or not, truth reveals today or tomorrow; sometimes truth or fact is recorded in human history; God controls this for mortal man of this world," father Samuel told Daniel.


Only for this paragraph, you think wrongly, or you assume wrongly, and presume wrongly or inadvertently, a writer should explain it personally, I do not understand, what makes you to express such a point.



It would be better, if you please explain me this point.


Your point is not clear to me.


In your last review of my work, I wrote to you for writing wrongly, assuming wrongly, and inadvertently, and presuming wrongly and desperately.


You never try to understand and appreciate meaning and importance, essence and value of a writer's writing and write wrongly and smartly to put writers in trouble and you unnecessarily harass a writer.


I am not pleading me for I never plead myself as correct and think I am the best.


I have not written a single word to plead my work and write anything to put in trouble unnecessarily.


As a result of your inappropriate appreciation, wrong presumption and mistaken presumption, you lose my precious time and resources which you can never compensate anyway.


A reviewer is expected to write his own or personal feeling and personal experience in the read and understanding of the work.


And I think a reviewer should be clear in his expression. Your expression is not clear and expressed in meaningfully to help a writer anyway, and such an act is derogatory.


Though, I am not complaining about this. I am just pointing out your action as a reader and my feeling as a writer.


Again, you have written something wrongly: I give your words below:

... taken phrase by phrase, it makes sense and expresses non-fiction ideas.....


I do not find this is something meaningful, while I have clearly stated in Author's Notes about this, but you have escaped or not read or misunderstood or assumed it wrongly and have written the aforesaid words.


Again, you have written something not appropriately: I give below your words:

....this is not written in a style that father and son would ever hold a conversation...


This states you have not read and appreciated my Author's Notes rightly, correctly and meaningfully.


Again, you have written something without appreciating the purpose or objective of the work and my expression and my Author's Notes, etc.


I have not written all these to plead my work anyway and I do not state I am the best and I have written that you should only accept.


You fail to understand the basic point, my work is expressed fictionally.


Please revise my Author's Notes for appreciation of my points.


Anyway, I have no objection, you are free to express anything, I only point out that you write like the wisest but you write controversially and inappropriately, moreover, you do not write expressively.


Another point, as a reviewer, you have expressed what others would feel more than what you feel personally after the read.


Besides, you have offered no explanation to your point.


Moreover, you have not offered any suggestion to help me in writing.


I find your review is not helpful to me as a writer.


You have every right to express your personal feeling and not what others would feel at the read of the work.


But, I appreciate your endeavour and thank you once again for writing the review.


Please do not take it personally, no one is perfect, and no one can write or say the last word, man is to make mistakes.


I hope, you will never make it an issue for lose time further.


Wish you every success in your chosen goal,


With best regards,


Looking forward to hearing your clarifications, if any, you would wish to offer,


May God bless you,


Alcreator Litt Dear


PS: Please excuse me if I have written anything that hurts you, though I have written nothing to hurt you, I know, it is evident

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I like this story. I think you point an interesting point of view about what people believe. But, we should be respectful by not offending. Nice work!

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2019

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Always enjoyed not only reading religious peach pieces but writing them every Sabbath Sunday
As Rich in Theme and as rich and Imagery... this flood perfect

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2019