Justice!
166 word spiritual fiction. Please read Author's Notes27 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Your essay that is created in a story form asks a lot of deep questions. You handled the narrative good, although you chose to include a child that asks questions, your answer is very philosophical, and I would think too hard for a child to understand. A good write, although to hard for the reasoning of a child.
Melissa
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Your essay that is created in a story form asks a lot of deep questions. You handled the narrative good, although you chose to include a child that asks questions, your answer is very philosophical, and I would think too hard for a child to understand. A good write, although to hard for the reasoning of a child.
Melissa
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
Comment from DonandVicki
I have been reading and reviewing your work and get the distinct feeling that these stories would make a good compilation for a book. Very well composed and engage the readers imagination.
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I have been reading and reviewing your work and get the distinct feeling that these stories would make a good compilation for a book. Very well composed and engage the readers imagination.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
Comment from Aussie
I liked your take on Justice. Whatever we put out into the Universe comes back to us threefold. As far as earthly justice, there is not enough police to cope with the dreadful occurrences happening today. I never thought in my lifetime I would see road rage so bad. Elderly people bashed for no reason. Makes me think twice about leaving home!
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I liked your take on Justice. Whatever we put out into the Universe comes back to us threefold. As far as earthly justice, there is not enough police to cope with the dreadful occurrences happening today. I never thought in my lifetime I would see road rage so bad. Elderly people bashed for no reason. Makes me think twice about leaving home!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
Comment from royowen
I think the very definition of justice is the breaking of the law of love Because breaking either the first or second commandment, demands God's Judgement, an act of obeying these two, is a violation of all law. Well done with this, blessings, Roy
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I think the very definition of justice is the breaking of the law of love Because breaking either the first or second commandment, demands God's Judgement, an act of obeying these two, is a violation of all law. Well done with this, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
Comment from kahpot
Very well said, we should not do good for others just to be recognized for it, but should be and will be punished for any wrong doing by the law or our Father, very well done with an excellent message for all****kahpot
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Very well said, we should not do good for others just to be recognized for it, but should be and will be punished for any wrong doing by the law or our Father, very well done with an excellent message for all****kahpot
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Wow. As my contemporaries would say: "That was deep enough to swim in." You always pack so much in each offering. You challenge your readers to consider more than what is on the surface. The fluid run on style of this piece invites one to consider the thoughts and actions discussed to be as fluid and interwoven as the narrative itself: thoughts, actions and consequences or seemingly lack thereof. BRAVO!
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Wow. As my contemporaries would say: "That was deep enough to swim in." You always pack so much in each offering. You challenge your readers to consider more than what is on the surface. The fluid run on style of this piece invites one to consider the thoughts and actions discussed to be as fluid and interwoven as the narrative itself: thoughts, actions and consequences or seemingly lack thereof. BRAVO!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, Justice, has a hard to follow assertion from a father that justice will always follow an action that requires it.
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This story, Justice, has a hard to follow assertion from a father that justice will always follow an action that requires it.
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
