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Justice!

166 word spiritual fiction. Please read Author's Notes

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Comment from WryWriter
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Another thought-provoking work. Man should not concern himself with whether or not justice shall be served to another man or what that justice should be. It is man's place to serve God, not judge others. We know not all, nor do we see all. We love God and do His will.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2019

Comment from tfawcus
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I think that, if I were Daniel, I'd have difficulty in understanding this answer. The wording is rather obscure. However, I understand Samuel to be saying that justice is more a matter for God than for man.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2019

Comment from Thomas Bowling
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The Bible says that because justice against evildoers is not executed swiftly, therefore it is fully set in the heart to do evil. A stern warning for swift punishment.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2019

Comment from Cindy Warren
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I believe that is true. Whether you call it karma or reaping what you've sown, there are consequences. I think inaction when action is required has consequences too.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2019

Comment from Darlene Franklin
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If I'm understanding this correctly, you're saying that whether justice is meted out in this world (because some things do have a natural consequence), God is the ultimate Justice. Thought provoking.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2019

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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When we don't receive justice in life, our faith often wanes and this is when we feel alone.

Suggestion for your opening sentence:

"Father, does man get justice (too), for (all) of his (acts), action (and) activity?" son Daniel asked his father, Samuel.

Best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2019

Comment from Lobber
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Hello,
Much to learn from your writings- "sometimes truth or fact is recorded in human history; God controls this for mortal man of this world"
- a valuable Truism
- Lobber

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

Comment from Ulla
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Hi there, I must admit I'm a bit confused here. I think you've used some very convoluted language that is not very clear and not common legal parlance (to use your own words) either. All best. Ulla

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

Comment from Sally Law
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I see this as an explanation for man is faulty at times in rendering of justice, but God, never. He is able to see into the heart and is always just.
Sending you my best today as well,
Sally ,+)

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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Quite the achievement being able to write pretty much a whole story with in one endless run-on sentence. In the end, intention determines whether an "act, action, or activity" is deemed good or bad since it is God and not any of us that has the right to judge it. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019