Gassed Up
While a motor sergeant.4 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
hahaha!! I love this! My husband was chief investigator/chief deputy, and I worked part-time for the same sheriff's office. Sometimes I would ride with him to study a crime scene, photograph, or take notes for interviews. He would get out of the car first, telling me to stay put for a minute. I always believed (LOL) that he was looking out for my safety. That was partly true, but I discovered he also used that exit from the car to fart, attempting to hide it from me.
Every word of your poem had me rolling with laughter. I could easily picture the scene. I particularly loved the following lines, 'I was all gassed up' and 'I thought I was alone And could fart free'.
Great rhyme. No artwork needed :)
Exceptional! I truly wish you the very, very best in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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hahaha!! I love this! My husband was chief investigator/chief deputy, and I worked part-time for the same sheriff's office. Sometimes I would ride with him to study a crime scene, photograph, or take notes for interviews. He would get out of the car first, telling me to stay put for a minute. I always believed (LOL) that he was looking out for my safety. That was partly true, but I discovered he also used that exit from the car to fart, attempting to hide it from me.
Every word of your poem had me rolling with laughter. I could easily picture the scene. I particularly loved the following lines, 'I was all gassed up' and 'I thought I was alone And could fart free'.
Great rhyme. No artwork needed :)
Exceptional! I truly wish you the very, very best in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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I'm glad you got a chuckle out of it, I realize it was sort of crude.
Thank you for our review and stars.
Comment from Laine Carson
Yuck! I have 3 sons who would laugh heartily at your fart poem. Must be a guy thing. Ha ha. Flow of poem was good. Imagery was...ummm disgusting but effective.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Yuck! I have 3 sons who would laugh heartily at your fart poem. Must be a guy thing. Ha ha. Flow of poem was good. Imagery was...ummm disgusting but effective.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Laine for your excellent review and five stars.
Comment from rockmann
I think we've all been there and done that! And as we age, it becomes more and more likely to happen. This was surely an arresting poem, and if anyone says it stinks, well, just smile.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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I think we've all been there and done that! And as we age, it becomes more and more likely to happen. This was surely an arresting poem, and if anyone says it stinks, well, just smile.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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Thanks for your excellent and funny review. It seems you are never alone when you really need to be. At least the young man had a good attitude about my embarrassing moment
Comment from Bill Pinder
Sounds like you were all gassed up with nowhere to go at the moment. The other guy just happened to be in the right place at the right time to share the experience.
Bill
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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Sounds like you were all gassed up with nowhere to go at the moment. The other guy just happened to be in the right place at the right time to share the experience.
Bill
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review and five stars, I'm just glad it wasn't a female who heard the noise.
