A Different TGIF
Not what you're thinking, I bet!10 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Why didn't Fanstory let you do TGIF? Too short? Weird. This was a fun little poem and definitely a good reminder for us. Sometimes we get caught up in what's going on we sometimes forget about God. Great job
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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Why didn't Fanstory let you do TGIF? Too short? Weird. This was a fun little poem and definitely a good reminder for us. Sometimes we get caught up in what's going on we sometimes forget about God. Great job
Comment Written 22-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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It said I could not do all caps. I tried doing periods after each letter and it still wouldn't let me do it. Guess they wanted me to know who was boss.
Jan
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a very powerful, well-written spiritual--CHRISTIAN-- piece.
We must rely on Him every day to guide and strengthen us. We must be aware of Satan's power--and of God's ultimate power!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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This is a very powerful, well-written spiritual--CHRISTIAN-- piece.
We must rely on Him every day to guide and strengthen us. We must be aware of Satan's power--and of God's ultimate power!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Thanks so much, Janice.
jan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have paused to smile at sayings that churches have on their signs on more than one occasion. Often they say what I need to hear a the time. Thank you for sharing this well written poem.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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I have paused to smile at sayings that churches have on their signs on more than one occasion. Often they say what I need to hear a the time. Thank you for sharing this well written poem.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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thanks, Barbara -
yes, a couple of my best poems were initiated by church signs
jan
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very catchy little saying that church had there! ;) You've taken it and made a very well-rounded little collection of rhyming couplets that would be great for a Vacation Bible School this summer! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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A very catchy little saying that church had there! ;) You've taken it and made a very well-rounded little collection of rhyming couplets that would be great for a Vacation Bible School this summer! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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too bad the VBS I volunteer in has already met for this year - but, there is always next year
jan
Comment from Teri7
I really like this TGIF! God should be first every day in our life but somehow we fail to keep it that way. You used very good words and I enjoyed reading this very much! Thanks for sharing my friend! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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I really like this TGIF! God should be first every day in our life but somehow we fail to keep it that way. You used very good words and I enjoyed reading this very much! Thanks for sharing my friend! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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thanks so much, Teri
I try hard to start every day with God, but I'm not always good at staying the course throughout the day
jan
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Jan, I can totally understand. I try my best, but things just crop up for some reason!
Comment from Raul1
This is interesting,but I wouldn't add God with Satan. It is just not a good idea. It is an interesting poem, but write something else that is better. Write about how God represents for all of us for example.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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This is interesting,but I wouldn't add God with Satan. It is just not a good idea. It is an interesting poem, but write something else that is better. Write about how God represents for all of us for example.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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I understand, Raul, and, if you check my portfolio, you will find I have written lots of those kinds of poems; however, this is what struck me when I saw the sign
jan
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Okay, thanks for letting me know.
Comment from Janetsue
I can understand why you were inspired to write this poetry after seeing that church sign. You've done a wonderful job with it. The message is spot on. You never know how something with just eight short lines might impact a reader in a big way. Forever blessings!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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I can understand why you were inspired to write this poetry after seeing that church sign. You've done a wonderful job with it. The message is spot on. You never know how something with just eight short lines might impact a reader in a big way. Forever blessings!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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thank you, Spangle
are you sure we didn't know each other in a different life?
jan
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LOL !!
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This is awesome. No artwork needed.
One reason I enjoyed this is because of your second line. As we well know, Satan specifically targets God's children for he feels he already has the others.
You used really good rhyme, and I like the lavender/purple 'spiritual' colors.
Beautiful :)
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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This is awesome. No artwork needed.
One reason I enjoyed this is because of your second line. As we well know, Satan specifically targets God's children for he feels he already has the others.
You used really good rhyme, and I like the lavender/purple 'spiritual' colors.
Beautiful :)
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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thanks so much, Gale
jan
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My pleasure! Thank you for sharing :)
Comment from Gail Denham
We are told to put on the sword of the Spirit (the word of God) -the breastplate of righteousness, - I would not challenge the enemy - I'd want God to go to the door if he knocks.
Thanks for your good poem that made me think.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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We are told to put on the sword of the Spirit (the word of God) -the breastplate of righteousness, - I would not challenge the enemy - I'd want God to go to the door if he knocks.
Thanks for your good poem that made me think.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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thanks, Gail, I wouldn't challenge Satan if I didn't know that God has my back all the time
jan
Comment from DonandVicki
Your poem goes right along with my favorite verse. "Today is the day that God has given us, let us be joyful and glad in it." I hear so many people complain about the weather, which is just the devil talking.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Your poem goes right along with my favorite verse. "Today is the day that God has given us, let us be joyful and glad in it." I hear so many people complain about the weather, which is just the devil talking.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Amen. thanks for reading
jan
