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Shoot-out

The police arrived just in time

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Comment from BeasPeas
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Very good job with this Essence poem. I've not heard of this form before, but I think it looks like fun. I'll have to try one. Regarding theme--chalk a win up for the good guys. Marilyn

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
    Thanks Marilyn
Comment from Lobber
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You wrote a poem about cops needing a word that rhymes with twice: How about: Lice or Vice or Dice or Splice or Ice or mice or Price or Slice or vide .....what you chose is actually nice. - Lobber


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
    Thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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It's sad that someone has to die, but if you carry a gun then expect to die by it, a poignant write and the cops lay their life on the life every time they patrol, especially in America, poignant words, Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
    Thanks Dolly