Smiles Amid Trials
An essence poem about positive attitudes.4 total reviews
Comment from Maria Millsaps
I really like the positive
and empowering message your simple poem brings. The photo adds volume to the message. Amazing how powerful a few words could be.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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I really like the positive
and empowering message your simple poem brings. The photo adds volume to the message. Amazing how powerful a few words could be.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Yes, it is amazing, as you say, how powerful a few words can be. Really appreciate the review! Thanks ever so much for your comments!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a good attempt, Mystery Author, with a complex style. Your picture and words pair nicely. However, the rules state 'an internal rhyme in each of the two lines.' I do not see that in your poem. I will return later to see if revisions are made. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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This is a good attempt, Mystery Author, with a complex style. Your picture and words pair nicely. However, the rules state 'an internal rhyme in each of the two lines.' I do not see that in your poem. I will return later to see if revisions are made. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Since when do smiles and trials not rhyme?
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smiles/trials do rhyme
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderful message for life much less an awesome entry into this contest!! ;) ;) And all reqs met so great job! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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What a wonderful message for life much less an awesome entry into this contest!! ;) ;) And all reqs met so great job! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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I so very much appreciate your reviewing, the positive comments and the good luck wish!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and the use of one
continuous thought is effective.
-All of the rhyming is also good.
-The topic is a good choice,
and the message is positive.
-A smile goes a long way
and helps us to feel better.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and the use of one
continuous thought is effective.
-All of the rhyming is also good.
-The topic is a good choice,
and the message is positive.
-A smile goes a long way
and helps us to feel better.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Do so much appreciate your positive review and good luck wish!
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You are quite welcome.
