A Wish of the heart
A heart's secret desire.7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This septolet, A Wish of the Heart, has the proper formatting and finds the dream of a child to be a persistent fantasy that will one day be real. nice.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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This septolet, A Wish of the Heart, has the proper formatting and finds the dream of a child to be a persistent fantasy that will one day be real. nice.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2019
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Thank you I am so glad you liked it. It got a lot of good reviews however, it came in just under 3rd place
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written Septolet poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very sweet words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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This is a very interesting and well written Septolet poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very sweet words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your review. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
She had a single desire, so her eyes focused in a window, now the new born babe rocks in, she sings holding him; a wish of the heart desire fulfilled; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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She had a single desire, so her eyes focused in a window, now the new born babe rocks in, she sings holding him; a wish of the heart desire fulfilled; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the review. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This is a beautiful 14 word poem but it does not meet the requirements of the septolet definition. There are only six lines in your poem.... Good luck fixing your offering and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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This is a beautiful 14 word poem but it does not meet the requirements of the septolet definition. There are only six lines in your poem.... Good luck fixing your offering and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Thank you for catching that. I have fixed the issue I just hope it was in time for judging.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Septolet when a wish of the heart comes true after we stare through the window with desire, holding a newborn in your arms is a priceless experience, even if it is not yours.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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A very well-written Septolet when a wish of the heart comes true after we stare through the window with desire, holding a newborn in your arms is a priceless experience, even if it is not yours.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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I know my daughter just had my first grandbaby. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is nothing like the gift new life to fill us with joy and desire, a fine presentation and I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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There is nothing like the gift new life to fill us with joy and desire, a fine presentation and I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your review. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from Lobber
What a mystery- does a newborn captivate us or do we hold (and control) the newborn? - Great choice of artwork but then I'm a great fan of booklotto - Lobber
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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What a mystery- does a newborn captivate us or do we hold (and control) the newborn? - Great choice of artwork but then I'm a great fan of booklotto - Lobber
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your review. I am glad you liked it and the artwork.
