tanka (ordered from Amazon)
which one comes first57 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
I think that the egg comes first and second the Hen. Funny and mysterious it sounds. I like how you structured this poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
  |
I think that the egg comes first and second the Hen. Funny and mysterious it sounds. I like how you structured this poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
-
Thank you for your excellent review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
-
You're welcome.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was clever, Janet. So, what did Amazon deliver first? The chicken or the egg? I love that cute picture, baby chickens really are cute, but like our children, they grow! Well done, my friend, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
|
That was clever, Janet. So, what did Amazon deliver first? The chicken or the egg? I love that cute picture, baby chickens really are cute, but like our children, they grow! Well done, my friend, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
-
Thank you Sandra for your excellent review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from the13thpoet
Jmf good morning. First let me start by saying good luck in the contest. Though I have dabbled with different forms of poetry since I joined this site, Tanka is a form I have yet to try. Anyway I thought I would finally get the answer to this age old question......so what is the final answer?
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
|
Jmf good morning. First let me start by saying good luck in the contest. Though I have dabbled with different forms of poetry since I joined this site, Tanka is a form I have yet to try. Anyway I thought I would finally get the answer to this age old question......so what is the final answer?
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
-
Thank you for your excellent review. I guess we will really never know - only speculate. :)))))
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Janet. I am a bit confused on the "amazon" reference here though. ?? did you order and receive the egg or chick? I know I sound stupid asking, but I am still just curious. Please forgive my ignorance. Bless you. Bob
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
|
Hi, Janet. I am a bit confused on the "amazon" reference here though. ?? did you order and receive the egg or chick? I know I sound stupid asking, but I am still just curious. Please forgive my ignorance. Bless you. Bob
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
-
Thank you Bob for your excellent review. I was really just having a bit of fun with this one. :)))))
Blessings my friend
Janet
-
: ) Bob
-
: ) Bob
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Janet. I am a bit confused on the "amazon" reference here though. ?? did you order and receive the egg or chick? I know I sound stupid asking, but I am still just curious. Please forgive my ignorance. Bless you. Bob
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
|
Hi, Janet. I am a bit confused on the "amazon" reference here though. ?? did you order and receive the egg or chick? I know I sound stupid asking, but I am still just curious. Please forgive my ignorance. Bless you. Bob
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
-
Thank you Bob for your excellent review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
-
: ) Bob
Comment from Benny Beeharry
This is very sweet write and I like it. It poses the same old question without the question the answer said to be final..not very. You get anything from Amazon.
Still the question may bounce back again sometimes, you never know.
Very original write though, tastes a bit of the japanese.
Benny
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
|
This is very sweet write and I like it. It poses the same old question without the question the answer said to be final..not very. You get anything from Amazon.
Still the question may bounce back again sometimes, you never know.
Very original write though, tastes a bit of the japanese.
Benny
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
-
Thank you Benny for your excellent review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Earl Corp
I'd be interested to know which came first, the chicken or the egg. This was an ingenious poem that was amusing and brought a smile to me az I read it.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
|
I'd be interested to know which came first, the chicken or the egg. This was an ingenious poem that was amusing and brought a smile to me az I read it.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
-
Thank you Earl for your excellent review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Teri7
This is a really cute Tanka poem you have penned about which comes first - the chicken or the egg? You used very cute imagery with the picture of the little chicks. Best wishes in the contest my friend! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
|
This is a really cute Tanka poem you have penned about which comes first - the chicken or the egg? You used very cute imagery with the picture of the little chicks. Best wishes in the contest my friend! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
-
Thank you Teri for your excellent review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from doggymad1
That is just so mean. After centuries of agonizing over this very important issue, you leave the unfortunate reader hanging.
Great work withing the confines of the Tanka. Best of luck in the contest with this one
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
|
That is just so mean. After centuries of agonizing over this very important issue, you leave the unfortunate reader hanging.
Great work withing the confines of the Tanka. Best of luck in the contest with this one
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
-
Thank you Freda for your excellent review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from judiverse
With Amazon's reputation, they'll arrive at the same time. Same day delivery of course! Intriguing subject, and one that gets great debate. We'll leave it to Amazon to resolve the question. Great idea for your Tanks, and best of luck in the contest. Maybe the topic is catching. I wrote about geese! Very enjoyable, and those chicks are so sweet. My parents always ordered baby chicks for spring, but they didn't stay cute very long. judi
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
|
With Amazon's reputation, they'll arrive at the same time. Same day delivery of course! Intriguing subject, and one that gets great debate. We'll leave it to Amazon to resolve the question. Great idea for your Tanks, and best of luck in the contest. Maybe the topic is catching. I wrote about geese! Very enjoyable, and those chicks are so sweet. My parents always ordered baby chicks for spring, but they didn't stay cute very long. judi
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
-
Thank you Judi for your excellent review. My family always ordered baby chicks for Easter. My sister and I always wondered what happened to them. When they started to get bigger - they just disappeared.
Blessings
Janet
-
You're very welcome. judi
