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I'll be Back

I told You

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Comment from Lobber
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I like the fact that an escape artist carries his career beyond the grave ... words like Dead may not have the same meaning or emotional charge- Lobber

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
    Thank you very much, and yes sometimes we try to be sensitive, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Sugarray77
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I love this witty verse that gives a humorous slant on this prompt. Great picture that sets this one up to the reader. Great job and I wish you good luck!!

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
    Thank you very much
Comment from Mia Twysted
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"I. B. Dead" very original. Then I see "Escape Artist." Trick gone wrong, or is he playing the trick and will he jump out right behind you and make his triumphant return.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
    Thank you very much
Comment from Bill Schott
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This witty epitaph, I'll Be Back, should probably be placed on the ground so that IB can crawl right up through it and take a bow.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

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    Thank you very much
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Thanks for sharing this humorous epitaph for the contest. Hope you're having a humorous Monday and stay above ground for quite a while longer. Have a great day!
Bill

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
    Thank you very much
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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The inscription of this epitaph is very short but it is witty about the imaginary person; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
    Thank you very much
Comment from Six-Star Writer
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So I guess I didn't escape. Maybe the trick isn't finished. Jesus escaped. He might be still working it out. You just need to give him a little more time.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
    Many thanks, and time he shall have
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written short witty epitaph. The escape artist called I B DEAD promise to be back even after death he will escape from the grave to return,

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
    Thank you very much
Comment from dragonpoet
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Cute death joke. This is one thing and escape artist can't escape from. Though if he makes it to everyone's wished for final destination then he won't want to escape.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
    I agree, never thought of it that way, very well said
reply by dragonpoet on 15-Jul-2019
    You're welcome.
    dp
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This made me smile when I should not, but you certainly created something magical here with so few words and this is an ideal entry for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
    Many thanks, (I think I'm glad, I made you smile)