Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

So simple and funny. I just love this. It leads me to wonder how Joe is taking all this in the afterlife and if he is going to haunt her. Oh, I hope he haunts her.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019

Mia, thanks for your review and stars. Glad you got a chuckle out of it. It's not doing too well in the polls.

Comment from Brenda Henderson

Excellent

I concur. She definitely did not share Joes Love. Unfortunately for Joe it appears that she did indeed share something with him. My guess is either the Gun or the Bullets! In either event She won't be bothering Joe anymore but since he's now a GHOST she may never be free! Cute and funny. I couldn't resist poking a little fun. Thanks for this satirical funny

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019

I really enjoyed your review. I like fun. Thank you for the fine review and stars.

reply by Brenda Henderson on 14-Jul-2019

Thank You! Enjoy the rest of your day!

Comment from Jerome Goldberg

Excellent

Great poem - short and sweet and tells the whole story. Really enjoyed it. Good choice of art work. Does it strike you as odd that the review is required to be longer than the poem?

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019

I've thought that many times. I hate it when it says add more words.
Thank you for your review and stars. I believe we need less words in our review and more six stars.

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Why is it that the poor ol' Joe is always picked on even in these fictional epitaphs. LOL

Terrific twist for your last line. Keep Casper in the ghost closet (-;

Great illustration to complement your contest entry. Best wishes for the same.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019

Joe does seem to always be targeted. Thank you for your review and stars.