Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

What a little miss, I'm glad she didn't get away with the dog-napping. This little miss wasn't as clever as she thought. You come up with some intriguing tales Maria, well done.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019

Thanks so much for reading, Valda.

Comment from Rikki66

Excellent

A thief gets caught. In her own trap hope she and Pug like Candy Floss. She is lucky the boss did not call the cops. Robbing a bank is my retirement plan. If I get caught I go to prison free room and board, better health care than on the outside.
LOL
Rikki:)

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019

Thanks so much for this fun review.

reply by Rikki66 on 16-Jul-2019

Glad you enjoyed.
Rikki:)

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Ahhhh, yes -- the conniving mind...it is ALWAYS planning the next 'thing'!! :) ;) A fun little one, Lady Maria, that actually showcases a personality known to law enforcement specialists! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing -- needed that 'persistence today! ;) :) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019

Thanks so much for reading.

Comment from A. Willow Bends

Excellent

Ah ha! Great ending! And she gets stuck WITH the dog! Good job with this one. Creative, well written. Liked the way you did it in two parts. Very good choice of photos to accompany! :)
Wendy

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019

Now a gang of three.;)
Thanks for reading.xxx

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Oh, oh! A little kleptomania there. I guess we are really easy marks for professional thieves. Your piece is well written and interesting. I hope she keeps both dogs. Marilyn

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019

I think she will. Thanks for reading.

Comment from Gail Denham

Excellent

Funny - and right back at ya' I guess. In the first part where you took the woman's wallet, you took a bag of biscuits - perhaps it should say "a packet of her biscuits"
Oh dear - headed into a life a crime...

good job.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019

Thanks for reading.

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hello Maria. Your story is very funny. It includes all the best features of good literature. You included an ugly kid, picking pockets, kidnapping a dog and planning to rob a bank. The story is quite funny. Robert

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019

Thanks so much, Robert.

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 15-Jul-2019

You're Welcome!

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Resourceful, is he? I love the kidnapped dog's name--Candy Floss. I won't be forgetting that one. I picture this dog colored a light pink, or possibly powder blue. This is fun Maria, keep them coming.
Sending you my best today as well,
Sal xo

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019

Thanks, Sally.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written story about the life of a criminal, always scheming their next move, if the one goes wrong, the other plan is already in place. A criminal mind never change route.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019

Thanks for your review, Sandra.

Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

This is the adorable second part to your story with Pug in it. You used great descriptive words and dialogue in this also. I read this one first by accident and had to go back and look in your portfolio for the first one. In my eyes it is a six star story and picture! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019

Thanks for this sweet review. I'm glad you liked the story.