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Comment from dovemarie
Dear Ricky, I'm glad you have a daughter who is an artist, she must have inherited that from you. She's strong and a fighter, from what you say in your poem, and I think she got that from you too. Great Poem! Dove
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Dear Ricky, I'm glad you have a daughter who is an artist, she must have inherited that from you. She's strong and a fighter, from what you say in your poem, and I think she got that from you too. Great Poem! Dove
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Yes Corey is quite amazing born July 14th 1983 a community memorial Hospital Toms River was the hottest day but I never seen walking from the parking garage just to the hospital is completely soaked!
Ricky
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is powerfully moving in all ways. The poem is well penned and when coupled with the notes can't help but move the reader to tears. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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This is powerfully moving in all ways. The poem is well penned and when coupled with the notes can't help but move the reader to tears. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Trying dear.
Thanks.
Ricky....
Comment from Lulube
A proud and honest write on your perspective view on your daughters character. Sometimes a child, when they are most expectantly to act or respond to situations but surprise everyone in which the opposite manner is used. We all have flaws and need self corrections but as long as we learn to get up and give it another try, you can't help but have a lot of pride and admiration for them
lulube
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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A proud and honest write on your perspective view on your daughters character. Sometimes a child, when they are most expectantly to act or respond to situations but surprise everyone in which the opposite manner is used. We all have flaws and need self corrections but as long as we learn to get up and give it another try, you can't help but have a lot of pride and admiration for them
lulube
Comment Written 14-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Thanks.
Note:
Corrine had lost only a few years before
Her childhood girlfriend.
Emily Eisemann.
They owned to he local candy store.
"Lucille's.'
Corrine started and single handly.
At age sixteen.
A Computerized shipping business.
This giving the Eiseman's old fashioned ways..
A Twenty First nitch on Shipping.
Since so well known now?
The prophets tripled.
Emily needed a Heart and a set of Lungs...
Dieing in the process at Children's Hospital in Philadelphia Pennsylvania.
Corrine works today promoting her art talents with major medical companies.
Last April her office made the corporation?
$14,000.000 plus.
They all got a paid vacation in Antiqua.
From Fudge to fortunes in less than twenty years.
She is thirty six today.
Ricky.
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no wonder you are such a proud dad, she's a super star, most kids don't excell to her level. sad she lost her friend though
lulube
