Seeking
Temptation can be very powerful7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Seeking, takes all the "tions" into account as someone messes up and gets his/her day in court. Sounds like a bad time was had by all with a Not Guilty to end the process. Hope justice was done.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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This poem, Seeking, takes all the "tions" into account as someone messes up and gets his/her day in court. Sounds like a bad time was had by all with a Not Guilty to end the process. Hope justice was done.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thanks for the review. Just a poem written with a bit of a rap beat,
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like the politicians mantra, the temptation to abuse their power or any person who is in a position of power who decides to use it for their own selfish purpose, I liked the sentiments here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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This sounds like the politicians mantra, the temptation to abuse their power or any person who is in a position of power who decides to use it for their own selfish purpose, I liked the sentiments here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thank you - I appreciate your very favorable review - coming from you it means a lot. Hope that you vote. Thanks
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks state and stand of your living in a great nation, your living is driven by temptation, abused by investigation, well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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This speaks state and stand of your living in a great nation, your living is driven by temptation, abused by investigation, well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the stars and the affirmative words. Hope you will vote when the booth opens.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Your temptation poem entry provided me with a spot of
invigoration in terms of looking harder for my muse so I
can get back into writing again. I like how you used all
those -tion rhyming words for this poem.
Good luck in the contest.
jan
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Your temptation poem entry provided me with a spot of
invigoration in terms of looking harder for my muse so I
can get back into writing again. I like how you used all
those -tion rhyming words for this poem.
Good luck in the contest.
jan
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the stars and the affirmative words. If I have played any part in encouraging your creativity, I am truly humbled and happy. Hope you will vote when the booth opens.
Comment from Mark D. R.
A terrific overview of the current political dysfunction our great country now faces. I have attempted to compose similar ones, albeit using my 5-7-5 format. Yours did justice to our 'trumped-up' crisis.
We do live in a great nation!
IMHO ... the capitalization for each line is unnecessary for this posting since it is not an acrostic entry. Methinks it 'reads' better without the caps. However, it is the poet who knows (-;
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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A terrific overview of the current political dysfunction our great country now faces. I have attempted to compose similar ones, albeit using my 5-7-5 format. Yours did justice to our 'trumped-up' crisis.
We do live in a great nation!
IMHO ... the capitalization for each line is unnecessary for this posting since it is not an acrostic entry. Methinks it 'reads' better without the caps. However, it is the poet who knows (-;
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the stars and the affirmative words. You've said that you like brevity and so do I. Hope you will vote when the booth opens.
Comment from Janetsue
This is a very interesting poem with each line offering the same rhyme.
These lines cause me to think about today's political environment:
Accused by insinuation
Abused by investigation
Best wishes in the Temptation Poetry writing prompt!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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This is a very interesting poem with each line offering the same rhyme.
These lines cause me to think about today's political environment:
Accused by insinuation
Abused by investigation
Best wishes in the Temptation Poetry writing prompt!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the stars and the affirmative words. Yes! Yes! and Yes! Hope you will vote when the booth opens.
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you're very welcome! I will plan to vote, as well.
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Great!
Comment from Willie P. Smith
This is worthy of six stars, but I have none left. How you put this all together and made it rhyme is amazing. I certainly can't find any need for
help with this one. Excellent job.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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This is worthy of six stars, but I have none left. How you put this all together and made it rhyme is amazing. I certainly can't find any need for
help with this one. Excellent job.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the stars and the affirmative words. Truly appreciate your affirmation. Hope you will vote when the booth opens.
